This is so great! I have read a few of these in diffrent categories, but only one other mirrored the book as well as you did. I would love to see you write one for Teal'c. Fantastic job on refrencing Stargate and the book. I was really blown away!

wonderfull ! had me roling on the floor (i got dust bunnies in my hair now )
loved it

Again you made me giggle. I love that book and I really loved reading this parody / homage to it. Poor Daniel, but chocolate solves almost everything.

After reading this, my own day doesn't seem half so bad. After reading the Author's Notes I would like to see one of either Samantha, Jack, Teal'c (he might be interesting to do since he has to give up his symbiote and switch to Tretonin) or even Hammond. I hope this gave you some ideas...meanwhile, I'm off to read some more of your stories.

Keep on writing :D

OH MY GOD!
This is possibly the funniest thing I've ever read! I love you!

Just found this. I love it! I have a son named Alexander, and I read this story to him so often, we both had it memorized.

You did a great job. I could see this happening to poor Daniel.

hehe, a great parody. I remember reading that book! Yeah, but anyway, it was really good, and you really know how to torture a guy.

Haha, that's really cute! Well done. Poor Daniel...but this is Danny-whumping with a heart. I love it.

i'm not writing about this story, i'm writing about ur croc hunter 1. I didn't read it but was very surprised 2 find a CH story. Bei'n an aussie (pronunced Ozzie), he is VERY stereotypical. In USA or whereever u came from, do the hav CH show ther? y? i'm glad u like my story. Danny being calm won't last long. the only thing on his mind is getting home. He trusted the green dude becuase he had no choice. it was either listen 2 green dude or die by the hands of jaffa. This particular topic will be more explained later in the story.
Thanxs! bye!

OMG this is the best mock of that story I've ever read! And I really liked the ending too! :-D

Poor Daniel. He was having a horible day. You stayed very close to the original story very well.

that was GREAT! i have always loved that book! i once found a Smallville version where Lex was having a terrible, horrible, no good, very bad day. i'm so glad you did one for Daniel. I'd love to see a Jack version of the story.

Sounds very much like my day, but mine hasn't ended yet. It's only early afternoon ...
I do not understand the review with the comparison between Atlantis and Australia and the more I think about it, the less I get it, so can you please help me out?

~ Ling

Nice job. I enjoyed this. Daniel does seem to be related (at least in spirit) to Alexander, and Atlantis sounds like a reasonable SG1 alternative to Australia.

It was hilarious! I've actually read the children's book, and it went along very well with the same cadences that I remembered. (I love children's picture books!) I would love to see the other members of SG-1, maybe the bad luck has been passed along when Sam gave away the chocolate bar? but any of the characters would be fun for a little bit of fun misery!