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zafaran
2008-10-02
ch 3,
abuseInteresting start. In your comment about bathing and cleanliness you might want to qualify that statement as you were a touch too general. You might want to specify the European barbarians. The civilized folks in the Moorish countries were far better educated and had much higher cleanliness standards. Even among the barbarians you had different standards of cleanliness. Elizabeth I is said to have taken a bath every six months whether she needed it or not, while in one of the Spanish courts, possibly Aragon or Castille, it was stated that one of the rulers had had two baths in her(?) life. One at birth, and one before her wedding, and having the one before the wedding was considered a bit excessive. In the depths of the Dark Ages, the people were sewn into their clothes, and only changed them when they wore out. Even at later dates once the Dark Ages past and the Renaissance had come through and changed things around Europe (and the Moors defeated and thrown out of Spain), things were a bit *ripe*. At one of the courts of the French Louis, there were no provisions for anywhere to go pee when the courtiers were in attendance on the king, so the courtiers would go pee on the floor in the corner of the ballroom. I hope your muse and schedule will allow you to write and post more chapters sometime soon. Keep up the good work. Zafaran {mailto:} zafaran {at} fastmail {dot} fm
Maddy Khan
2008-10-02
ch 24,
abusehey there...this story is pretty awesome...read it all in 3 days...and i just want more...update soon...tczz...bye
Hannanora-Potter
2008-10-01
ch 24,
abuseThis was a wonderful story. I often look for LotR-HP crossovers, just because I find them highly entertaining. I must say that this is one of the - if not the - best one I have ever read. The interaction between the Fellowship and Harry is believable and the turn it takes on the story is very interesting. You have got all the characters so well and, to repeat myself... I LOVE IT! Very much looking forward to your next chapter!
Love, Hannanora-Potter ~x~x~x~
Servant of Anubis
2008-09-23
ch 24,
abuseWhat a completely enjoyable read! I shall be waiting anxiously for your updates. Very well done
JadeOokami
2008-09-22
ch 24,
abuseAh. No. The end. For now. I haven't read a story so long and so good in a long, long, long time. So I hope you update soon, and good luck finishing your other stories.
Kiseki no Tenshi
2008-09-20
ch 24,
abuseGreat update! ^_^
Can't wait to read more!!
LadyWolfRider
2008-09-07
ch 24,
abuseplease update soon I really love this fanfic
brolly501
2008-09-07
ch 24,
abusevery cool story best HPxLOTR story iv ever read i think im looking forward to more soon
AnthonyR89
2008-09-03
ch 15,
abusegood story so far, i know ive read at least part of this story befo0re but it was a long time ago. anyway i noticed a mistake in this chapter, in the following passage:

That, and they would frequently become bad-tempered and irritable ere you said anything to oppose them. Aragorn was a smart man and readily agreed to Harry’s plan, though he knew not what it was about

ere means before. therefore, it makes absolutely no sense where you put it. i know this, cause after the twenth time reading it in the LotR books, even though i could guess what it meant, i got irritated enough to look it up in the dictionary.
Seishuru Magni
2008-08-31
ch 24,
abusethe best lotr harry potter xover on the net
lotrhpfan1234
2008-08-24
ch 24,
abuseOMG. This has got to be one of the best crossovers ever! Seriously, this fic has me totally hooked! I am anxiously awaiting the next update!
writerlover101
2008-08-23
ch 24,
abusePlease update soon! XD
LadySerenity0000
2008-08-20
ch 24,
abuseLove this story!
Tarva
2008-08-18
ch 24,
abusePlease update this miracle piece of art!
ZeroTheDestroyer
2008-08-17
ch 3,
abusegood fic
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