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Minion Of Sekhmet
2007-04-12 . chapter 1
Oh wow, this story is beautiful...I'm so glad I found it. I've always had a massive soft spot for Sion (in fact, after Bao-Dur he is my favorite character in KOTOR 2) and this fic only strengthens my love for him. This is a wonderful insight into his character, and I simply adore it! Thank you for fleshing out the poor Sith Lord and delving deeper into his feelings for the Exile. //Adds to faves list//
Darth Phex
2006-02-12 . chapter 1
Almost all other fics I've read discrib Sion as the super evil guy. I truly injoyed this story because its excellent and truly a work of art! I feel sorry for the guy *snif*. Looking forward to more of your fics! ;)
Clover64
2005-11-29 . chapter 1
Beautiful. This is an excellent example of good writing. You actually gave depth to both characters and made them seem real. Truly beautiful...
SanguineExile
2005-04-17 . chapter 1
I also found the dialogue between LS female Exile and Sion very interesting, and I think you've done it justice here. Kudos!
Master Alabe
2005-04-07 . chapter 1
Ultimately, that was very very very kol =)
I do like Sion fics... seems there aren't many of them though... but this was real cool, thanks for a true delight in reading! =P
Cat, Avatar for the DCG
2005-04-05 . chapter 1
What a facinitaing take on the story. "Things that make you go 'hm'." As it were. Stay good in the future!
-Cat
axilya
2005-04-04 . chapter 1
wow, pretty good. Finally someone wrote about Sion and the Exile. I always thought the last fight between them was intriguing and interesting. He had a totally different dialog if he faced a male exile which made me think that there might be something more than just the way he regarded the female exile.
Lady Azar de Tameran
2005-04-04 . chapter 1
Beautiful!

Ever Hopeful (For an Update),
Azar
snackfiend101
2005-04-04 . chapter 1
Beautiful. Have I read this elsewhere? It sounds familiar. Livejournal or something? Oh well. It's amazing. My sole suggestion would be to fix the spacing issues--they don't really detract from the story itself, but they're irritating nonetheless. I will never be able to look at that fight--and the conversations during/after it--in the same way again.

Thanks.
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