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| kisstina123 2008-06-03 ch 3,  | abuseOMGoodness! this is really good! i really hope that you write more! |
| kisstina123 2008-06-03 ch 2, | abusethis is so good! keep it up! =] |
| kisstina123 2008-06-03 ch 1, | abusethis is good! im so glad that i decided to read it! |
| ElvinDragon 2007-12-02 ch 3, | abuseohh update soon! |
| Entrancing 2006-07-22 ch 3, | abuseAww. I know that seems to be the wrong word for such a story but that was the effect the last sentence in the second chapter had on me. I really don't know why... Maybe it's the way I am, maybe it's the quality of your writing. The latter is most likely. In my opinion, you don't need to change anything. Please update... You're leaving me hanging for dead on that last sentence... |
| Mpro1 2006-07-19 ch 3, | abuseCould you update...please? |
| deniche 2006-01-22 ch 3, | abusehey great story! hope you update soon deniche |
| DreamGirl101 2005-07-02 ch 3, | abuselike wow! thatwas good but alittle short. but very good and please don't do those cliff hangers itkinda gets annoying. somany people do that anthan like up-date 2 weeks later so not fair . SO PLEASE UP DATE SOON! |
| Zeppelin Girl 2005-04-10 ch 3, | abusehey! This story is awesome so far! Keep writting! Maybe you could make your chapters a little longer. ~Kelsey |
| Magic Noden 2005-04-06 ch 3, | abuseGreat story. I was waiting to see what happened when you didn't update the old one. Great job. |
| v cool ff 2005-04-06 ch 1, | abusethanks for the reviews, next chapter soon! |
| Saynt Jimmy 2005-04-05 ch 2, | abusei wanna kno what happened to alex!! update soon! |
| alexiro1 2005-04-04 ch 1, | abusethis is really good. keep going. i love the suspense and using scorpia again is really clever - just try to tie that in with a new organisation etc./threat :) - smilz - :) |