nice job

That's pretty cute. xD It's also really good first your first FF fanfic. Please continue with them!

Although I found some errors in the story though, such as:

"Want to get ride of me?”

I didn't really understand that part xD.

Great story - well done.

how cute =D gippal and rikku made such a great couple

This is a great chapter! I love ur stories! UDS!

wow! this is great as a first fic! ^o^ your really good at writing! i cant wait til ya write more!

i like the relationship between the two of them, it'd be nice if this story progress! because then i'll really read it!nice work

oh deary me. i love this fic. its so sweet, and it gave me such warm tingly feelings =D its excellent as a first fic, i mean really great job. i loved how it flowed very nicely and was not rushed. i loved your opening, and your ending. and oh, i just loved it. please write more fics.