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Dara-si
2009-10-15 . chapter 1
Very touching:-)
OffbeatLover
2009-09-17 . chapter 1
I can't get over how beautiful this story is. I have read it 3 times in the past two days and it is perfection every time. Beautiful work.
Verbal-Enigma
2009-03-14 . chapter 1
OMG I love this story. It was so immensely beautiful. I think, I may have even shed a tear there. It was heartbreaking yet so...magical.

=D

FANTASTIC
Annuin
2008-09-24 . chapter 1
the first fanfic that made me cry... it's simply beautiful and touching
Dust Particle
2008-08-11 . chapter 1
ohmygod.
so glad i read this.
you made me cry! *wipes keyboard with sleeves* and i had no tissues around!!
that was.. amazing.
.The.Wingless.One.
2008-08-11 . chapter 1
So amazing! Made my cry! >.< It's just, SO cute, and so angsty, and so.. perfect! Lupin's so sweet, Snape's so helpless, it's just adorable on a number of levels. I really with this wasn't a one shot, but if you never continue it, well done. :3 I would love to see another chapter, but if not, I loved it. It was very well written and it really sucked me in. Fantastic!
Haruka-Hime
2008-04-15 . chapter 1
Beautifully written.
olinjerad
2007-08-23 . chapter 1
What a touching story. Loved the way you developed it, by first telling from Lupin's POV, then from Snape's.
TheExclamatoryPanda
2007-07-01 . chapter 1
That.. that was a very powerful story. i was absolutely sobbing through the whole thing, it was so sad.. but then again, it was hopeful, because of the immense love that it portrayed... damn it im crying again, heh. it was simply dazzling -- your a truly talented writer!
Sins of a Broken Heart
2007-03-20 . chapter 1
this story was so beautiful and sad. it touched me and made me cry. i can't a story can affect me in this way.
Lizzy
2006-12-11 . chapter 1
Absolutely lovely.

I especially admire the way you slowly revealed more about Snape from Lupin's point-of-view and then got Snape's take on it afterwards.
Verbera
2006-06-20 . chapter 1
Whee, I am allowed to log in. This is depressing. I know, it's also fluffy and sweet and all, but most of all, it is so depressing. Very bitter-sweet. Lovely.

Also, it is my personal canon boggart - that Severus does not die, but stays alive in such a state, maybe like the Longbottoms or something. Or worse, is kissed by a dememtor. *shudders*
ShadowBallad
2005-12-20 . chapter 1
That...that was heart wrenching! It honest-to-God made my cry. And I don't usually cry even when reading sad stories.

It broke my heart. I couldn't imagine living with a paralysed body, blind, mute; unable to speak, see, or move. It would kill me.

This touched me so much...it really reminds us that there are more things in life to be thankful for even amidst the darkest shadows of our lives...

I am definitely faving this. Too beautiful to pass up. *is sobbing now - literally*

Thank you.

Ballad
K. Decker
2005-10-06 . chapter 1
I am an avid consumer of fan fiction and I have NEVER read a story as beautifully written as this one. I was weeping by the end, and yes... days later I still find myself thinking about it. Thank you for sharing.
TheDeathChamber
2005-07-30 . chapter 1
You really made me cry. It was amazing, amazingly sad too.
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