Cool. I can most def recommend these to my pre-teen girls to read. Solid with a strong basis for hope. Gotta like that.

Hey, not bad! I liked the narration by Cyclops; the guy is so serious most of the time it's nice to see him lighten up. And Wolverine is... well, Wolverine. Good story.

ah, w00t, another Christian writer.

I like the understated humor and attention to detail in this story, also the depth given to the characters. There is nothing flashy, showy, or artificial about it, it flows naturally.

God bless!

This fic was rare and very nice find!

Oh, love this love this love this.

"Kurt is a great guy. He also happens to make the best pancakes ever."

Great combination of humor, quiet drama, and angst.

It was touching to see Scott filling Jean's shoes as a counsellor. I liked how he overcame his pain and regained self-confidence. I enjoyed the exchange between him and Logan and felt it was a great way of shifting the tone of the story to end with a sense of renewed hope.

“ ‘Course, I probably woulda just advised her ta kick the crap outta the guy.”

“And that,” I reply, “Is why I’m handling the hormone-driven trauma patients and you’re lurking around in the front hedge.”

lol Touching, but not in a gushy way, and you even got some fun Logan and Scott interaction in. Heh, I liked the "almost as good as" too. :o)

I really enjoyed this. It's very intelligent, humorous, and well written. I'll have to read more of your stories; we happen to have several fandoms in common. (And may I add that it's great to see another Christian around here.)

Wonderful story!

I loved it!

i like that. it's sad, but uplifting.

That was a great story. When I was reading it I didn't realize you were the same author that wrote Pancakes, Paradigms, and the Princess Bride, but I remember really enjoying that one too. I'm not sure if I read the other one in this trilogy. You've really got an excellent way with words, a sense of humor, and a great ability to write about the ordinary, every-day lives of these remarkable mutants. Good job!