ahaha this is very interesting :D

i love the crispy thingy xD

*can't help it; falls over laughing* i LOVE this! Especially the last stanza, that is TO FUNNY! *glomps Shishio* I love him too!

((How, if he had eyebrows left, he would raise them…

In a suggestive manner, even though there is nothing down there…))

Oh my God! That part cracked me up so much! XD

Great job!

OMG I can imagine what'd happen if someone gave this piece to Shishio... Either you'd be dead quicker than you can say 'crispy' or he'd stare at you crying like a little kid with a 'I-am-SO-gonna-tell-mummy-that-you-are-making-fun- of-me'-look and then run off into hiding.

I mean, the guy's totally mental. But I like him anyway.

Nice work yo!

Heh, funny poem. Hmm it reads a bit too much like prose though, I find that humorous poems are best written with rhymes and meter.

YAY! A fic with the same name as me! And about Shishio! The Bandage Man poem... the Crispy poem... it doesn't get any better than this! _ -Crispy

*Falls over LAUGHING* This is SO great! LMAO!

lol!good one! sounded like the description of a potatoechip!BTW i made a story in english , if ya wanna chek it out .

ciao!

Haha...it's nice hearing a humorous side to Shishio Makoto...even if it's not really his perspective. That guy really should loosen up once in a while...

The poetry was nice. I love your writings, as usual...very brief, to the point, and yet with enough extra in there to fill it up and make it complete. Brilliant.

A few things I liked...

"I love him in many ways.../So...many ways..." This phrase almost makes her sound about half-insane...which she probably is, seeing as she's tending to this "sausage-of-a-man..."

"How, if he had eyebrows left, he would raise them..." I love this one. I think that too, he'd do it a WHOLE lot more often if he did have eyebrows...he just seems like the sarcastic type when not provoked into battle. A no-nonsense guy with no humor and no optimism...just pure cynical calculation beneath it all. It matches him...the eyebrow-less eyebrow raise. _

A "sausage-of-a-man..." still cracks me up. Reminds me of some Jimmy Dean's...swinging a huge sword around, saying, "You'd better not eat me, or else..."

My thoughts are becoming deranged too...

But yes. Extremely enjoyable. Please write more!

very good

endidio! it is a weird poem, but i really like it!_... (my sis loves it!)

XD I LOVE IT! ROFL!

Of course I do! SHISHIO FOREVER!

*seeyng everyone looking at her*

Ehe...sorry, I've got carried away _

hahaha! I love this one...very funny...and the only poem in that I was able to like. this is very mind-blowing and makes you think that crispy is beautiful.

*smothers laughter* Oh... my... Crispy sausage of-a-man...*snorts* I'd love to laugh, but people are trying to sleep. This is great.

Read your bip... never try to read my fiction. I've nearly given up the goast and deleted all of 'em... *sigh*

boo