Er... what the hell happened? I dont understand...

I'm scared... This was a very in-depth story, and I didn't fully understand it. Your ending wasn't bad.

Aww... I liked the ending. ) Kinda depressing, though. /

I need to get around to writing a story that I'm actually going to post... P

I can't believe you killed them all! And they only found one body out of five! What happened to the others?

so what the hell happened to the others bodies

omg omg omg omfg i cannot believe that u just killed Dark

hey, I liked that ending!

well, at least Dark-kun wasn't the only one to die here

BlackAngel

No! My Dark-kun died! Wah! so not cool, soo so so not cool!

Anyway, good chapter...

BlackAngel

weird. very, very, very weird. *hands you a cookie* Hmm... *stares at the story some more*

Did Dark just die? He better not stay dead! What is going to happen to Daisuke? And what is Mrs. Harada trying to do?

Is Risa and Mrs. Harada dead or something? update soon please :D :D

Good chapter. This is a very unique story, can't wait to see where bit's going. Please update soon.

okay very nicly written i will give u that but what was going on with Krad in chapter 9? i didn't know the harada twins were 23 in this story! So if Daisuke is 16... i dont remeber but is Dark his twin? if not hopw old is he?

That's a beet creepy, well done. Update soon.

Eventhought I already read about half of this, I likeed the ending of the chappie. I think you'll get this a lot, but I hate cliff hangers! You'd better update fast, or I'll... umm... umm... thingy.