I feel like a prick- but you don't may for medical care in Britain, unless its a private hospital. Sorry, but I love this story all the same. :)

Good story, but you've got some mistakes- it's not cell phone but MOBILE phone in Britain. Also PRIMARY school not elementary. But I'm being really nitpicky all the same. Sorry, but americanisations in potter fiction irritate me. XD

Still great story! -continues to read-

This stuff was really deep.

The ending was...different.

On the one hand i knew that he could never really truely be at home.

On the other, i just sorta needed to see his brothers accept him, hug him, make a joke or two. to have Ginny hold him close and comfort him, to punch him for not thinking that he could come to his family, to make him promise that he would stay.
I think i sort of needed to see him become a Weasley again.

It was a really interesting story, with characters we don't see much often, which was good. Thanks for this story and the good moment I had reading it! Cheers

Wow, intense, but really good! That was well-constructed, and wonderfully written! I love Percy-related stories and this is one of the best I've seen (out of all HP fics)! Is there a sequel? Does he come back to his family? Does he move on from Penny?

This is one of the best fics I have ever read. I look forward to reading your published works.

Lady Mage

Interesting. I really enjoyed reading this. It's odd, but you've managed to, without mentioning them once, create exactly how I imagined the Unspeakables to be like. All in all, a good piece. There was one incidece when you first mentioned Lestrange, where you make it sound as if he had laready been mentioned, but that may simply be me reading at a stupidly early hour. In the end though, it's one inconsistancy in 17 chapters, good job.

Original complex plot. Great character development. Almost impossible to walk away from. what's not to like? I really liked that it centered on Percy Weasley. Thanks so much for creating an ending for it. One of my favorite fics!

THAT WAS AMAZING! SUCH indepth characters and, may i commend you on your work with derrida? =) I don't think i've ever seen a fanfic author make use of his contradictory binaries as wel as you have =) AWESOME piece!

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I really like the idea and all of the ways that this story could possibly go. I think you've set it up well so far and of course I want to know how Percy ended up in the muggle institution.

I'm a little put off by Percy being missing for 3 months and the Weasley family not seeming to care at all. I would think that Molly would be sending Arthur out every night to look for him, wringing her hands and asking everyone for help finding him.

The only large issue that turned me off while reading were the typos/grammatical errors/bad sentence structures. The story doesn't flow as well as it could, and I would highly recommend getting a beta reader or two. I'd be happy to be one of them, if you'd like. I think that tightening up the writing would really add a lot to the story.

Overall, an intriguing first chapter.

One of the best stories I have read in a long while. The way you featured Percy and showed that no one knows him without making up a personality that contradicts canon is brilliant. Thank you for writing this.

...Oh, what a wonderful fic. I've always loved Percy, and you just brought him to life in an absolutely amazing way. And I love Remus being the spymaster at the end! So perfect. Thank you for sharing this fic with us. :)

Out of curiosity, since you've got a degree in psych, you know that repressed memories recovered under hypnosis are more hype than actual science? (That said, it's still a useful fictional device.)

Otherwise, interesting story. Good job with the nice slow buildup and laying clues.

Hi -- I just wanted to say that I read this story some time ago and liked it, and have recently 'Niffled' it at FictionAlley Park (

This was good. Really, really good. It's difficult to find anything original or intriguing in this fandom, so I'm very glad I happened upon Deconstruction. The intrigue and mystery was brilliant. And Percy! I'd have liked to see more insight into his thoughts, what made him make the choices he did... but in the end it even works out better with us having to fill in the blanks. Great writing and a unique plot. What more could I ask for? Thanks for writing/sharing this story.