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| HannahCimsGwendolyn 2005-12-09 ch 1,  | abuseVery sweet! I really liked this oneshot! I never pictured Sara as a smoker, but hey, you are the almighty author! The characters were also very much in character. -Hannah |
| Faith Lynn 2005-11-12 ch 1, | abuseThis is about the sixth story I have read of yours. Each time I come to the end, I am truly wowed. Particularly with this story, the "dance" between Sara and Gris is done so well. The one part that surprised me a little was that Sara was smoking. Although I could potentualy see her smoking, I never have elswhere. I had always figured that most vegetarians tend to also be non-smokers. |
| lantiscod 2005-10-16 ch 1, | abuseSpeakless love... |
| Victor 2005-10-14 ch 1, anon. | abuseSo great! I like your way of telling this fic! |
| nithe 2005-10-03 ch 1, | abuseOh my god, that was horribly well written. I know, sorry about the wording, but I couldn't think of a better way to express how much I loved this story. I can't wait to read more of your work. |
| Bernadette 2005-05-20 ch 1, anon. | abuseThis was a marvelous story. The give and take between Grissom and Sara's viewpoint was perfect. Excellent job! Kudos to you and your beta. |
| jrh927 2005-05-09 ch 1, | abuseThis story was absolutely beautiful! |
| Niggi 2005-04-25 ch 1, anon. | abuseI love it. |
| dkscully 2005-04-22 ch 1, anon. | abuseBeautiful! Will read anything GSR that you write! |
| DolphinAnimagus 2005-04-11 ch 1, | abuseWonderful character study with such a lovely ending. :D *goes to read sequel* |
| sarah makinson 2005-04-07 ch 1, anon. | abuseYou are truly a great writer. I love how you capture their emotions so keenly, that the reader feels what they are feeling. Awesome! |
| taramis 2005-04-06 ch 1, | abuseLovely! I enjoyed Grissom analyzing the meaning of the New Year's kiss. You handled both POV very well. Thanks for this! |
| Hope 2005-04-06 ch 1, anon. | abuseYAY! Another wonderful story! :) Bravo! |
| brainfear 2005-04-05 ch 1, | abuseAwesome fic! So sweet. Catherine's quips always make me laugh. Good job! |
| witchazel 2005-04-05 ch 1, | abuseBeautiful story. You wrote it so well. The characters were perfect, and the way you switched from Grissom to Sara's points of view was really good. Very realistic in the actions and dialogues too. The ending was perfect too. It's on my favourites list. :) |