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   CenasNakedInMyBedWithMe 9/21/05 . chapter 6Aw- I can't believe it's over..for now anyways. lol. :) It was so sweet at the end when Randy kissed Lita on the hand, he's such the gentleman. I can see Randy listening to hip-hop for three weeks easier than I can see John NOT listening to it for three weeks. That would be so hard on a man who loves his music so! Great job Kori! Really a fabulous fic. :D |
| cerenity 9/18/05 . chapter 6 aw i love! i so want more! |
| Princess Hermione 9/17/05 . chapter 6 hmm well it's not letting me sign in but anyway! Loved the story! It was really good! Princess |
| aussiewrestlingfan 9/17/05 . chapter 6 Hi Kori, Just wanted to say that I loved this story, it was very well written. :) Carolyn Australia |
| wwefan01 9/16/05 . chapter 6 hey good liked the story alot |
| Latisha C 9/16/05 . chapter 6 This was a great way to end the story. Though I was looking forward to Li and Randy being at the mercy of Dawn and John. If you ever decide to make a sequel, I'll be here ready and waiting to review. Later. Lori |
| wyntertwilight 9/16/05 . chapter 6 Great finale! I loved that chapter and the end, there was a nice equilibrium reached there, and you don't necessarily have to continue - it's either/or. I'm content with the way that finished, it's expected but again, if you decided to do another series, it'd work! I really liked the bet conditions and I'm actually glad Lita and Randy lost because them being at Dawn and John's mercy sounds really funny. Well written chapter, great series in general Kori, keep up the awesome work! |
| Maviea 9/16/05 . chapter 1 i like this story hope to read more |
| Funky In Fishnet 9/16/05 . chapter 6 Really great ending, I loved the stakes for the pool game - made me smile alot. U wrote this story so well, keep it up :- ) |
| That One Apologue 9/16/05 . chapter 6 Awesome ending... Dawn and John cheating to win a game of pool. That was a nice touch, also the stipulations could be used in the sequel. Cause I wonder who Lita's dates will be, and I also wonder how Randy will like dressing in the hip-hop clothes and listening to the music. I liked the ending, not what I expected, but better than I expected. Great job, and good luck with the sequel idea... |
| CenasNakedInMyBedWithMe 9/10/05 . chapter 5 Awesome chapter! I loved the whole pool tournament. lol. Looks like someone got hustled! |
| wwefan01 9/7/05 . chapter 5 good cahp like alot |
| Pinayprincesa 9/6/05 . chapter 5 aw sweet:D |
| Princess Hermione 9/6/05 . chapter 5 Hey, Sorry I haven't reviewed the last couple chapters! But I'm back now. *grins* Loved the update! Princess |
| Funky In Fishnet 9/6/05 . chapter 5 Really great chapter. I like the pairing of Batista/Victoria, it works very well. The pool-playing scene made me smile. Keep it up :- ) |
