wow that was a long chapter. maybe to much description, the story could use a faster pase but other wise it its brilliant

that was good, your descriptions seem to never fail and I enjoy your subtle fluff. Over use of fluff can get annoying sometimes so BRAVO! amazing job

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I love your story. AND I LOVE THIS CHAPTER! I love the end where he's like 'stay' because I don't know it was nice...


M.

well there goes our sweet innocent wendy enter the trollop wendy. WHAT HAPPENED TO THE SWEET ADVENTURE STORY BY JM BARRIE HUH! still LOVE this story tho very sweet when he comforts her. just went a little...far for me. But u made it sound very sweet. Keep writing
-Hummingbird

wonderful story

i adored this story! it was fantastic i couldnt stop reading it! it was so sad wen wendy left her mum i cried lol but it was also realy cool dat she was goin 2 live wit peter. i just wanna say thanx 4 writing these fantastic stories keep it up x

I've always wondered what would happen if Wendy had her period in neverland... I was about twelve when I got mine...

hah! silly men... panicking at everything.

oh my, this was beautiful! i cried at the end, it was so beautiful! are you doing a sequel? you really should, cuz this was fantastic

Well I must congradulate you on writing the best Peter Pan Fanfic I have seen. This truly is wonderful. Not just because they end up together or because of the romance and such, but the plot was wonderfully well thought out. You really did have reasoning behind it all and I was glad when it all tied together in the end. I loved Kirano, he was a great character. And my favorite part was when he explained to Hook that Peter was changed and taken care of by the island, which is why he was always a boy, and now suddenly a man. You managed to make it all make sense. Thank you very much, this really was enjoyable to read.

This is wonderful. Very well written, and exquisitely detailed. One of the best Peter Pan fics I've read.

Wow. I feel so slow for just now finding this story. It was amazing. I've laughed, cried and smiled so much. I LOVE IT. Amazing! :)

loved it loved it loved it! great storyline, everything fitted, well done and i hope you get lots of praise casue that was excellent!

Well squeezy no wonder you got zillions of reviews - truly great story telling, plot,pace, sex. Cool. And I don't even read Panfic - heaven help me. I take a bow to the master - but you still have to post my rubbish, sorry.
Must belong to a creative family or something!
Rose

Waah! *has read it all through at once*

I loved it! Very very much!
And your writing style was beautiful, gorgeous, enthralling, stupifying. T_T *Is in love with story*

wonderful story, totally lovely ending just like all the other stories of yours.aww..*sighs* your writing is so beautiful and intense.