 Chiame-Yoru 2006-08-06 . chapter 1Please hurry with the next chapter!! This is one of the first Beyblade fanfics I've read and so far its really good!!
^_^ & X_X |
 ............. 2005-07-02 . chapter 1 ugh...blood and gore...
i bet it was ray who picked her up...^^ |
 perishedlove 2005-06-07 . chapter 1RAY! It's Ray! lol, at least that is what I think! Great job so far...try not to be too mean to Mariah... |
 m 2005-05-19 . chapter 1 ow! I can't wait u have to update real soon, ok? plz plz plz! I'll be waiting! |
 Bluestray 2005-05-11 . chapter 1Man Mariah is 1 hot fighter! I am hoping that that was Ray! Plz update!! |
 Tai-for-you 2005-05-05 . chapter 1I love it!! plz update soon! |
 Catgurl2004 2005-04-17 . chapter 1wow...is she gonna die? Please update soon! Is that dude Ray? I like this so far. ^_^.
cats rule |
 lunarangel 2005-04-09 . chapter 1 I want to know more, please. I love this story. Mariah's turned into a worse version of Kai. |
 Aquarius Galuxy 2005-04-08 . chapter 1Ouch... >_< Poor Mariah!
Was that Ray? =)
Update soon! |
 chenna-lann 2005-04-06 . chapter 1 oh damn Mao's certainly needs Rei's help! deadly dragons i like, i like! continue |
 Lyrikkal 2005-04-05 . chapter 1Interesting. And moving at such a swift pace too. Please do continue. |
 Galux Kitty 2005-04-05 . chapter 1O_O;; Jeez, Mao's gone a bit downhill hasn't she? You know, with people trying to kill her in all... Rei shall have to save her! Update! |