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2lazy2login@themoment
2009-03-07 . chapter 8
goodness gracious... I can't remember this fic at all! I'ma have to read through it again... (I even read the last two chapters, not ringing any bells...)
powerofthepen22
2009-03-07 . chapter 1
It's very cool, but a bit confusing... I think it would be great if you could show more of who Kate is. I'm not getting a very clear picture of her world--is it like modern-day? Is it very magical and mysterious?

Your description in the dream was very good! The only thing was that I couldn't tell at first what was a dream and what was reality. Also, explain more about her being hanged as a witch. It took me a while to realize what "crime" Kate had commited.

I know you're trying to keep the reader in suspense, but too much time in the dark might not be a good thing. Is Kate innocent? Who/what does she feel is chasing her in the dream?

Thanks for a great read! I'm really new here on fanfic (as in, today!) but I enjoy reviewing already. I'm really going to like this site! I'll subscribe to some more of your stories and I'll let you know when I publish some of my own :)

--Kate (yes, my name really is Kate...maybe that's why I read your story in the first place!)
justjustice
2008-04-20 . chapter 1
love it
bookcrzygirl
2008-01-04 . chapter 7
finally, an Old Magic story, I've been looking for one ever since I first read the book. this is awesome!
KoRnChildG
2007-12-29 . chapter 2
Great story! I wasn't aware that there were any Old Magic stories, but I'm glad that there are since I love the book. Great ending to this chapter.
UtterChaos247
2007-12-18 . chapter 7
*wide-eyed* ten monthes, this story has not been updated in 10MONTHES...
please tell me u plan to continue it :(
KaylinNeya
2007-11-26 . chapter 7
Ok I thought i was resonably good at writing but then all these people like you keep putting me to shame! =] This is brilliant! you have such talent i really envy you. keep up the brilliant writing it is truly magical. Old Magic will live on in us!
HelloBatty
2007-11-06 . chapter 1
I loved this chapter, I have to head to bed because I am tired, but I will read the rest tomorrow, its very good so far, bravo!
jamielouise
2007-11-01 . chapter 7
great story.. update soon please,
MIDNIGHT-PIXIE
2007-08-10 . chapter 7
ah! well, it took me far too long to review this!! i hope that you continue it sometime...it's so interesting that i really want to know what is going to happen next. well...good writing!!

ttyl
Merrymow
2007-04-03 . chapter 7
I was wondering when you're going to update?
iLoveTelevision
2007-03-17 . chapter 7
please update soon i hope Jarrod and Kate end up together soon! :D
lovah of Ron
2007-03-12 . chapter 7
I really love this story. Update soon!
Mac-alicious
2007-03-11 . chapter 1
I just started to read your story, and I'm enjoying so far. I just finished reading the book and was considering writting some stories about it. So I sought out some stories on it and found yours. I like it, the only thing is that the evil guy's name was Rhauk not Ranuk. Other than that, great job.
CaseyC*
2006-06-07 . chapter 6
I AM SO SAD THEY'RE NOT TOGETHER! seriously, I AM GOING TO DIE IF THEY DONT GET TOGETHER! lol, PLEASE UPDATE! IT'S FANTASTIC! pretty please... ...
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