enjoyed the story, are you planing on continuing it?

This story’s really good, will you PLEASE continue it?! I really like the plot; Syndrome trying to win Mirage back while getting revenge. They have a complicated relationship, where they love each other, but he's trying to hide things from her. It makes things interesting, and their interaction is wonderful! I'd love to read more and see how things go, please update? *looks hopeful*

update plz:)

WOW. That was SO HOT...

Okay...

Mirage babysitting? That's marvelous, so awesome. I can see why they'd like her, too, she seems to be the type that kids would just fawn over for no reason.

And Syndrome!?

"hick town"

hahahaha-- Go you!

HOT HOT HOT

ugh, mirage is so hot

(i swear i'll read/review the rest later, but i needed s/m smuttishness.)

Nice i like

*drools*

Damn that's good stuff. Now I feel ashamed of my own stuff. You know, I read this before, but I never realized that it had been yours. Now I'm lookin' at it and goin' "Hey, she reviewed my story! Must...return...favor!"

That and I needed some serious inspiration. I think I got it now, so thanks!

Great story so far, and I can't wait for more!

CLIFFIE! AH *looks frantically for a button to the next chapter*
i wanna know what happens!
love the story though ^.^v
update soon! (please?)

you actually make me feel bad for syndrome! i love the whole other side though
the incredible's family lifestyle is a nice touch too... cute how bob and helen won that trip and i think you got the way they would have acted perfectly
great job on syndrome and mirage and developing their past

I was hopeing something like this would come up in this chapter. lol. I really enjoyed it and great job!! Continue this very soon please!!

Oh yes! That was just what I needed. You are amazing. LOL That was so hot. Wish that could've been me. Yeah...

Oh, but um, yeah, about the story...right! LOL Seriously though, this keeps getting better and better. I just loved when Syn was like "If anyone can hear this..." and then the guy runs in and he's like "Thank you!" Hahaha! He was so lucky, but somehow I foresee Buddy getting into a mess. ;)

Keep it up!

~~=oP

OMG! I LOVED this chapter! It's so *sniff sniff* wonderful to see Mirage and Buddy together. I really hope you continue this realy soon!! I'll be on the look eeryday until you update! lol great job!!

WHEW! I really, really thought you'd abandoned this fic, like so many writers do, it seems. What a relief to see an update! And believe me, I know about the payday thing, though I'm a bit richer than you at the moment. I have four whole dollars to MY name, so there, LOL! This was a welcome treat, like I said, and you really showed that emotion conflict going on within Buddy quite well. Even in the movie, he never saw himself as "evil" or a "bad guy", but I guess that reality is starting to sink in. It waits to be seen if he really CAN change, doesn't it?

PitBull_Lady

Thanks for the review SirenFoxx! I promis that the next chapter will have some more details about a certain "event" between our favorite couple. Your stories rule too! lol. As for Syndrome I'm trying to protray him as slightly twisted but in a way that makes him easily forgiven for his twistedness. As the story goes on you'll see why he does what he does.

Hey! You can't end it there! Where's the rest? Write more soon!