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Reviews For: Hyper Chondriac Music - Reviews: Page 1 of 2

pltzchen
2005-10-18
ch 5,
abuseAw I liked it! It was really good and...I did like it. It was sort of...unexpected. I liked that Billy was a huge user. It was much different. :)
2DaysofInspiration
2005-08-23
ch 5,
abusewow.
wow wow wow wow wow.
i will say, it's getting a bit confusing and hard to follow.
but even that doesn't take away from the intensity.
update soon.
Binkiebabe1754
2005-08-19
ch 1,
abuseGreat story. Please continue.
confwuzzled
2005-08-16
ch 5,
abusenice! to lazy to write more
pancake whackee
2005-08-15
ch 5,
abuseFan-**-tastic. I don't want to sit here and give you a 500 word essay on why I love Hyper Chondriac Music. Mostly cause I don't have all that much to say, and because I'm not the most intelligent person that could think of things to say. So I'll tell you that I do love it. And that I'm waiting for more. Yay.
confwuzzled
2005-08-13
ch 4,
abusebeen so long since i read ur story i can't remember wut happened but i can't re-read it now cause it's like way past midnight and i'm ** tired and my mom will kill me but i promise to re-read the first chappys soon. gr8 new chappy tho! that made absolutly no sense... i need sugar...or weed...
2DaysofInspiration
2005-06-16
ch 4,
abusewow.
majorly intense.
really emo.
once again, loved it.
update soon.
Chinsky
2005-06-14
ch 4, anon.
abuseOkay so I suck at reviewing for every chapter.

But you're absolutely amazing.

Really.

Fanfiction has been ** me off lately so I'm kind of going away from it a little...but I'd read anything you write any day. I love the way you write. The plaid thing made me laugh. No one's ever written Billy up before...at least, not like this. This=really really good.

I'm off to read the other chapter of the other fanfic you wrote that I was too much of a lazy ** bum to not read. Yet.

--Rose/Chinsky

p.s. If I'm making no sense, excuse me, I just had my Social Studies final. I actually screamed out in pain when you mentioned the Roman Empire.
2DaysofInspiration
2005-04-20
ch 3,
abuselove it love love love it! update soon!
SD
2005-04-19
ch 3, anon.
abuseYou just think of me as SD because it's easier to type out. ADMIT IT! You're lazy, just like me!

Ah...but this chapter...brilliant, as always. I'm not going to go into how much I loved it. Nope, that's I lie. I think I will. You got the headrush on caffience with steroids style that I really, really, really love!! Out of curiosity, have you ever done ecstasy? Because you talk about it pretty knowingly. Well. I wouldn't know if it tasted bad.

Ecstasy is one of the worst kind of drugs you can do, because it's so unpridictable, it's a...um...what's it called...synthetic drug, which means you don't know what's been used to make it. You can die from just taking one, you know. Scary ** right there. BUT, great material for a story. Officer DARE, I liked that. I found it very humorous.

But not as much as I loved the kissing at the end! Ah, how sweet! "I think you're beautiful too"...aw...don't leave it off there, go more! I need more making out...aw...hot damn, this makes me want to write one of these...but I won't. Can't steal your thunder, no-siree! Not to mention, you probably do it a hell of a lot better than me!

Damn dead cellphones. I always forget to charge my cellphone too. I like how Gordon felt the need to kiss Billy back quickly before he went into a "I'm sorry, I'm stupid, shouldn't have done that" rant, that's so popular with those kinds of kiss scenes. Not that I think Billy would do that. He doesn't strike me (in your fic...or in the movie either) as the type who would regret doing anything.

Dancing on the top of an elevator. That sounds like fun...hope they don't fall off. Are they going to get out of the elevator to a hotel room and make mad love. Because I am not opposed to this turning lemon fast...but if it doesn't, I'm not opposed to that either. I just love your writing style so much. It's infectious...it's addictive...it's like really good candy...like lemonheads maybe...or...um...I'm done. I have to go do laundry...stupid mother...

UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! Please? (Yes, the p-word, and I desperately mean it!)

Peace.
confwuzzled
2005-04-19
ch 3,
abuseOMFG!! u updated!! YAY!! u kick so much effing **!! I luv u very much-as!! i liked the line: 'Christ on a bike!!' el oh el!! the ending was so sweet!! i'm like, "YAY!!, they're finally kissing!! YAY!!" I can't believe ur the only person who writes BillyGordon slash, they're perfect 4 each other!! And as i said, i'm hooked on it, so update frequently(sp?)
luvs and drugs!! jk
~*~confwuzzled~*~
confwuzzled
2005-04-17
ch 1, anon.
abusePLEASE UPDATE SOON! u haven't updated and now i'm going through BillyGordon withdrawls!! your the only one who writes that slash pairing!! please please please update!! i'm begging u on hands and knees to update b/c i love you and i love BillyGordon slash, u've got me hooked on it!! so my point is to please update b/c u are an awesome slash writer and i really need some BillyGordon slash!! ^^
~*~confwuzzled~*~
PS-sorry i couldn't login, i already reviewed this chappy!! =P
confwuzzled
2005-04-10
ch 2,
abuseNICE! i effing loved it! you gotta update soon b/c U R the best! i liked billy's POV. Ec-sta-sy, ec-sta-sy. hehe, that cracked me up for an odd reason. please update soon!
~*~confwuzzled~*~
thesolitary-dragon
2005-04-10
ch 2,
abuseI still LOVE this story. Oh, this is 'SD', if you didn't know..., I was too lazy to log-in last time. And you know, I totally checked this out because it was Billy/Gordon. I don't read Freddy/Zack, because...frankly...I don't get it. But this story, I get! And this pairing, I get! And it's wonderful. I just never understood why there was this perfectly evident gay boy in the movie, but in order to make 'slash' ff's, everyone had to take two (in my opinion) non-gay boys and make them gay!! Just USE Billy!

Anyways, about your fic (because my ** can go on and on and on...etc.) you are an awesome writer. You have this hyper style, where everything just spills out at once, and very few people can pull that kind of writing off. I want to feel all angsty and ** in this chapter (because of Billy's poor "habits") but some of the lines just made me smile, and sometimes, even laugh. And the last line "And don't think I'm sharing any of my Ex", I burst into laughter. So funny. You have perfect timing with your humor.

Okay...maybe I'm the only one that would find that kind of dark thing funny. But I love dark humor, and I love the idea of making Billy this coke-addict type person. Adds to the angst, and what not. This story is brimming with potential, and I totally love it! So much, even, it's going on my favorites list.

SO...UPDATE soon. (When I saw this was UPDATED, I nearly tripped over myself trying to open it and read it, I was so excited!)

And thank you **so** much for giving Billy a little love in the slash world, and in the fanfiction world as well!! (I myself am a little guilty of fading him into the background of my story...) Which brings me to another line I love so much...your description "Freddy and Tomika and Zack and other generic band-mates..." I found it funny, appropriate, and, just generally, awesome.

I would love more of this very soon! I will be checking for this, and I really can't wait to see where it goes.

Peace.
Nanners-77
2005-04-10
ch 2,
abuseVery good chapter. Update soon!
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