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| Yugi Muto 2008-07-25 ch 2,  | abuseMake more please? |
| Haruka-Hime 2008-03-09 ch 2, | abuseThis was really good, it gave me an eerie and haunted feeling. I especially enjoyed the description of Yami waking up from his torture/sleep. |
| Pandorasbox917 2005-06-10 ch 2, | abuseThis was really good. It gave me the shivers. I especially enjoyed the descriptions of Yami emerging from the puzzle. |
| Kitroku 2005-06-02 ch 2, | abuseCool can't wait to read the next part! |
| coolgirlmich 2005-04-19 ch 1, anon. | abuseGood story!I love stuff about the first season (season 0) it's just so fashinating!Keep writting! ^_^ |
| Misura 2005-04-19 ch 2, | abuseAn engaging second-half, in which I especially liked Yugi's trust in his other self, and his reasoning for not telling Jou or Anzu. ^-^ |
| Daikaio 2005-04-19 ch 2, | abuseInteresting. Bring the next chapter soon! |
| Anna-Jay 2005-04-09 ch 1, anon. | abuseaww! that's soo good and cute! are you going to do more? plz do! |
| xamosy 2005-04-07 ch 1, | abuseinteresting... very interesting, update soon, i'm eager to know more! (you got me hooked) xamosy^-^ |
| Silvershadowfire 2005-04-07 ch 1, | abuseNice. I want to see part 2! |
| Hikari's-dark-side-08 2005-04-07 ch 1, | abuseHikari's DS:@__@..must be *gasp * GOOD! and loger, ut otherwise, me likey!! Don't be afraid to be descriptive honey! ^_^ (glomps and gives you a cookie) |
| Misura 2005-04-07 ch 1, | abuseA very compact, yet also impactful style of writing, that was quite enjoyable to read. I liked the effect and the mood it produced, as well as the plot of the story itself. I'm very curious to read the second part of this (and glad to see that yup, there's going to be more). ^-^ |
| Green Phantom Queen 2005-04-06 ch 1, | abuseThat is so cute! Update soon so we can see Yugi's reaction to the dark spirit. |
| Master Elora Dannan 2005-04-06 ch 1, | abuseGood start, keep going! :) |
| Chocoholixx 2005-04-06 ch 1, | abuseNot a bad start. I'll be waiting for part two soon! |