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t-me
2008-05-06
ch 1,
abuse*snort* This is funny. Great story.
hoheehum
2008-04-18
ch 1,
abuseBest. Origin story. Ever.
Trscroggs
2008-04-03
ch 1,
abuseI LOVE this piece. A well thought out and particuarly effective crossover. I even saw a comic where there was a tailor for super-heroes, but yours is so much better.
alicat54
2008-01-13
ch 1,
abusethis is so good. i love how you used it as a start up for e's career
teh blumchenkinder
2007-10-05
ch 1,
abuse“No,” said his victim shortly, as if he’d asked her for her opinion on shoulder pads or low riders.
Instantaneous Laughter of a Loud Variety and Obscene Duration. ILLVOD.

You got Edna dead-on. Oh goodness. ^o^

“Darling, your fashion consultant is like your hairdresser, you tell all. Fshht,” she shook her head and hissed, “confidential, of course, completely.”
Perfect!

“No, no, darling, this is Italian Crimson, totally different.” Edna held it up. “And Royal Indigo, for the legs. Much better.”
Hey! She's right, y'know... (but again, perfect!)

*blink* I think you even got the right time period for Spider-Man and Elasti-girl... (1960's).

I was wondering why Edna's office was in that building...
^_^ I like the fic!
Shinteetah
2007-07-09
ch 1,
abuseFun! I like the mashup, I like the confused mugger, and I like Spidey's reluctant transition to super-fashion. :-) Thanks for sharing.
Gollum's Fish
2007-05-11
ch 1,
abuseThank you for writing a Spider-man fanfic that was actually entertaining! I've read loads recently that have promised great things and delivered poorly. This was an interesting yet perfectly reasonable crossover, and you captured Edna perfectly - I could hear her voice in my head, as well as Spider-man's. That is the problem with a great deal of fanfics: they have the characters saying things they simply wouldn't, or they take corny phrases (in the case of Spider-man) and make them sound ridiculous - kind of like Krozone "battling" the robot... His name was Krozone, wan't it? I've forgotten ... you know what I mean!

Anyway, yeah. You wrote this brilliantly, and it's going on my favourites list.

All the best,

Gollum's Fish
yellulhchicken
2007-03-11
ch 1,
abuseheheh rather convoluted in the timelines since your mergint the comic spidey with the movie spidey and the increadibles. but still funny.

hnn... is this just a oneshot or are you planning on expanding it into something more??
Ladyofthebookworms
2007-02-26
ch 1,
abuseHaha! Most excellent!
StarVix
2007-02-08
ch 1,
abuseThat's so cool! Spidey was Edna's first hero!
Qem
2007-02-03
ch 1,
abuseTres chic. =D

I greatly enjoyed reading this!
hercat
2007-01-18
ch 1,
abuseAbsolutely fabulous dahling. This is perfect. You've got Edna's voice down pat.
lembas7
2007-01-06
ch 1,
abuseHah! Brilliant!
GoldenRat
2006-11-15
ch 1,
abuseThis has got to be the way it happened. Go Edna!
Sakura-chan
2006-11-15
ch 1,
abuseThe sheer and utter brilliance of this simply cannot be put into words.
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