I enjoyed every chapter until from from this story and I hope you will come back to finish it one day; soon, I hope!
Please, don't let such a story unfinished!

In answer to your question, I think that more plot twists would add considerably to the story, being a fellow author, though not as good as you.
I do want Neji and Sasuke to end up together though!! I can't help being an avid Yaoi fangirl!
Keep going with this story!! It's amazing and very descriptive. Love it!!

I look forward to your next update :)

I realized that it would soon be a year since you last updated. Please don't leave your story now. Not like this. I really loved it. ::tears::

Please continue your story! I realise that this story has been left untouched for quite a while now and i understand that great writers tend to run out of new ideas for plot-twists in muli-chapters, or might even lose interest in the characters associated entirely. But this fic has come a long way in both plot and character development and it would be a real shame if left on hiatus! :3

Really great!
Please update?!

i have to say i looking forward to the next chapter of this story also in the story where sasuke goes undercover does his gender change can you give a hint in the next chapter also i would love to see this ikorin be possesive and protective of sasuke only because i have read so many stories of sasuke being possesive or protective all in all i really love this story except the other stuff i written in this review

A really interesting story. I like it.

I love the story, don't get me wrong, but... Why is Neji in Shikamaru's and Ino's team? And what happened to Chouji?

UPDATE

so i see this fic hasn't been updated in over a year? well...either way i hope you'll eventually do so. keep up the good work!

Oh. My. God.
Congratulations, you have yet another devoted zombie follower.
Aren't you glad? XD
I've read all of the chapters (from 1-14, no joke) in one sitting- one, mind you, with a potty break, but TMI, I guess-. Wow. I didn't know I could do THAT before! Maybe I DON'T have symptoms of ADHD...
Look! A butterfly! I think I'll call him...Pete!
Here, Pete, here boy...
NO PETE, NOT THE SPIDERWEB! NO, WHY? WHY? HE WAS SO YOUNG...
Ahem. Where was I? Oh yeah, I LOFF YOUR 'TORY! I suppose I should at least TRY to begin the second chapter of mine...
I loved how suddenly the scenery changed in chapter 14- it was very refreshing, and the new OCs are interesting...
But Ikorin Tenji is getting a lit-tle too close for comfort...perhaps I should pay him a little call?
--
*ding-dong*
*Ikorin opens door*
"Hel-"
"FANGIRL ATTACK OF DOM!"
--
I'm sure I won't be alone in the movement.
NEJISASU SHIPPERS, TO ME! XD
Erm. Sorry for the wasted minute to two minutes of your life...NOW GET BACK TO WORK!
Have a nice day :)

I-I love it, and am currently trying to figure out why I was mad enough to read this part when there wasn't more. No offense, but this was a horrible place to end it. To much suspence, and what is Sasuke doing? Only comment is to be careful if OC charaters, they can either overwhelm the fic, or just be to there for the author, and disrupt the story, but so far it doesn't seem that way, and as annoying as it is to have people say 'update' it's been a while...please update, I love this story!

Nice. I couldn't help but think that Temji Ikorin was Negi in disguise...I'll just have to wait and see.

omg! when are you going to up date this story!? please do it soon! you can't leave it hanging like that!will sasuke and neji end up together? wut is going to happen!? you are going to make me go insane not knowing wut happens!