rather short, but well written. good job

I love me my white haired boushen, Yue and Bakura are my faves, so duh I liked it. Looking forward to chapter 2, I need to update mine too.

There's gonna be more? Cool!

Cool and cute. Sweet and simple. I loved Yue and Touya fics. Plus, Yukito too!

It's very good ^_^ I like this pairing, and I hope you'll continue soon.

I thoroughly enjoyed this beautifully written piece.I felt the tones of Touya and Yue were befitting. Although I loved the CCS anime (and manga version) to death, I felt that not much room was given to develop Yue's character (the monosyllabic scenes aren't very helpful either). So, it's cathartic to read your piece, since there's a glimpse of closure from Yue's attempt to sort out his 'issues'(with Clow, with his false form whom I can't believe he always in consensus with, with the new mistress, and of course, with Touya. Kudos, I look forward to your next contribution.

This is GREAT! PLEASE continue it! I can't wait to see what will happen next.

Megmaie

*wonderz if story is good...* been too busy to read it... gomen... ><

~Dark~

Nice plot and story! Kepp up the good work.