your story was good ^+^ keep up the good work

This was very well done! I liked it. The characterization seemed mostly even, and I think you should either have left demon mating instincts entirely out or gone into them more, but other than those very minor details this is really truly good! *deep breath*

I especially enjoyed how well you went into motives, not just events and actions. Keep up the great work!

I LOVED IT! OH, FLUFFY-NESS WRITENTH BYTH YOUTH, I LOVETH THEE! Yes, I DO know, I AM insane. Hee-hee, hello little white jacketed men, what are you doing up at such a late hour? hee . . . . hee?

that was so cute! a really sweet and great job!

This was actually really good! i got confused at some parts, like i couldn't tell when something was a dream or in real life. BUT ALL IN ALL IT WAS A GREAT STORY!
Quote from the story:
'Your humans and your foolish emotions.'

Lovely job! The end was very cute! ^.~

This is a great one-shot.I love it.The idea about the dreams of Hiei not caring for her was genius.

*Hearts in eyes* Aw...this one ADORES H/B fluff!! ^__^ Great fic! You most definitely must write more!

pretty good! could i possibly ask you to write a botan/kurama fic? that would be wonderful!

very cute...my favorite yuyu pairing.
nice job