Please continue!! this fic is really heart-warming!!

This story is beautifully writtern and I love Muyu's and Larva's characters please finish the story or even the next character thanks.

your story is just wicked but i must ask you one thing ...
Why don't you write more , i mean it cant be finished already
can it??
Please!Please! write more ...

X THNX already

;_; Such a haunting feeling. Miyu is that, definitely. I'm just reveling in the very Miyu-ness and the supposed Larva-ness. *wipes eyes* May they fall in love forever more, because if they don't, then I will die of heartbreak. *sobs* Oh god I love this fic so much I don't know what to say. *bawls*

A huge stream of kudos to you! *offers cookies and flowers and daimonds and my firstborn*

I am... twitching in place right now. *fidgets* There is such a current of excitement running through me! I find this fic to be completely refreshing and delightful. *shining eyes* There is much potential for such a storyline for our beloved characters Miyu and Larva (that's how it's most often spelled, by the way, although I'm not sure if you spelled it Lava on purpose to suit the story; either way, it doesn't seem to bother the storyline much, so yay). I love their personalities. I greatly, greatly look forward to more interaction between them and unfolding events!

Gargh, I can't take it anymore! I LOVE THIS STORY! T_T

Please update...I really am eager to know what happens!

Wow, this was simply beautiful. Your writing skills are amazing. Are you going to continue this? I hope so.

I was moved by your story. The sense of longing, lonliness, and an unwanted destiny is in every word you write. It has been such a long time in which I've read truly excellent fanfiction. There has been some good, but you are of the rarity. I really hope you don't give up with this fic and continue to update. I swear while reading these two chapters I could hear Miyu's playing her flute in the background. It sent chills over me. I just wish there was more. ~SMDSP~

From prior experience (I wonder if that's the right term...), not many people finish VPM fics no matter how good they started out as. But I'm hoping that you'll finish this story unlike others that I've read and not leave me hanging...

A lot of the fics here are one-shots, so it's good to see a multi-chapter story with a plot. (Yay! *happy dance*) I really do love how this story is going so far and I'm looking forward to seeing more.

The characterization of both of the main characters were...well, really good! And I've only read two chapters...wow... I'd really (I've been using that word too many times...) hate you if you stopped here. I don't know who you are or where you live, but I'll haunt you the best I can.

Geez, that was long. Sorry for wasting five seconds of your life; just needed to get that out. Please, please keep writing. XP

Such a wonderful beginning ^__^ It would be really appreciated if you continued this story.

OMG
This is such a cute and nice fanfiction! Please continue it because I am curious and eager to know what's going to happen next. It's wonderful! The idea is so neat and the way you wrote weaves a picture in my mind because I do understand the story. Do continue it! Please! Hehe. I'll be checking in ^-~

-Mystical Sorrow

This is very well written, and I enjoyed reading it. I'm looking forward to the next chapter--it's not often that I find such an interesting, descriptive piece of fanfiction.

Aie, I read this when you had last updated and read again, all the while awaiting an update. It's a wonderfully written story with a great AU take on these two characters. I hope that you will update soon, I'm sorely tempted to draw some fanart to it (seeing as I went back to read my VPM manga now).

Awsome story, love the detail! very sad yet enthralling cant wait for the next chapter!

This is so good and really sad. Update!
-serenity77