I haven't seen a story written in first person for a while, and this one pulled it off wonderfully.
Very cute, very sweet, perfect for Naruto/Hinata

“You know, any time you want to peel my layers you just gotta ask.”


priceless.

Very very very cute!

man, i really liked this story. especially the part about choji swallowing a spoon.

yeah, you're right. there is no such thing as too much naruhina fluff in the world.

Innuendo!! Nice!

i really like this fanfic! even though there are some spelling mistakes, it's not like every other fanfic i've read! it's pretty creative! you've even made an AU good!

This...was...AMAIZING! My host family thinks I a ape shit crazy (they already knew that but, now its confirmed) because I was giggling madly, repeating lines over and over. and refusing to give up the computer. I love this story and the sexual inuendoes! I Love YOU!

This chapter is amazing! It's so good! Nice story line! Use of language techniques was awesome!

This story was so cute! It completely made my day. Thanks for writing!

-Steph

that was hilarious!
lol

Hahaha holy crap that was funny...
It was nice and funny which is hard to find around her..
Keep at it...

Wonderful story I wish there was more to enjoy.

What a gem of a story! I haven't laughed this hard in a long time, so sweet :)

Just wanted to say I quite enjoyed reading this story.. the characterizations were credible and fun, and the humor was quite good in all three chapters. The Awesome-kage line probably takes the cake, but there were a lot of good moments.

I also like that this story got where it was going and finished strong, rather than stretching over a thousand chapters and petering out without an ending, as it seems all the other stories I like seem to.

Good work!