great story

This is a great story. I love it. the one problem I have, though, is that you have to many people winning by Ring Out. I mean I know it's hard to write detailed fight scenes for so many characters, but I keep seeing all my favorite fighters losing because some other fighter took the pussy way out.

oh and jones=orlando jones

oh, i forgot, and Jones is supposed to be Orlando Jones. i think

oh my god, i just got done reading chapter 17. i kept thinking to myself that LBJ reminded me of someone, and i just figured it out. JBL from WWE Raw. i thought it was funny you put him in the story.

Remarkable

I love this fanfic but I think Eliza believing that Ken would be on his way to another planet so easily was unrealistic unless this takes place in the distant future. And what did Vega do?

Great stuff. Congrats on finishing, but i hear this is a trilogy now. :) Can't wait to read the rest.

So far this looks good. I'll keep reading.

Even though I got quite lost in the action a lot of times (JUST LOOK AT HOW MANY CHAPTERS I MISSED! :O), I'm so glad to see this finished, and grateful that you mentioned me. You really put a lot of effort into this Jami and I'm VERY impressed. Your writing has definitely come a long way. Now I'm truly fearing the alliance of Shao Kahn and Ivy Valentine. That's a very, very bad thing...xD

I'd be honored for you to review Orochi Strain and give me some ideas okay? :3

maybe in the sequal you coulb bring back Genral M.bison i want to see the pyscho crusher in writing and i'm a M.bison fan

so Shao Kahn and Akuma have become one being this will be interesting i will be waiting for a sequel and hope it will just be as good as the first

cool story

Lol. yes.. :( I shoulda reviewed more sooner. Anyway, lets get started (flexes hands)

Ep, I was actually going to ask why there was three portals and not two and then I remembered about Edenia... silly me.

Yay! The Kriss is destroyed! :D At least thats one small problem outta the way, and Ashrah is already out of the Netherrealm so :D yay.

Nice evil fight :) Lemme guess though... Charging at each other which lotsa energy? Explosion? lol

Har Har, Quan Chi got sent back again, how humiliating. Once is okay but twice is careless. lol

Nitwit Ken! Think of your family :P Oh well...

YAY! Shang Tsung is dead (dances). And Kenshi killed him (with a lil help). :D One down! More to go!

Well thats more into the portal :)

Uh oh... Evil Sakura be coming to get ya! lol

Anyway :D Next!

December I'll be old by then. Argh I can't wait. I loved it perfect ending. I can't wait for the sequel.