AWW I LOVED THIS!
It was sweet,
It was long...
BUT IT WAS CUTE!
You are truly something.
iloveit!
-Kamu-chan

HEY! OMG I LOVE THIS FIC! i almost was in tears!! awesome!

Simply beautiful. I loved the ending. : ]

I loved the ending!

O_O;; O.M.G, THE best KyoKagu fic I have EVER read, sigh, ^.^ I love this pair so!

This was a beautifully written fic. I read it when it first came out, but I did so again recently, and it was even better the second time around. I can definetely picture Kagura as an author, one who, in spite of all that happens, still holds on to her until-recently unrequited love of Kyo. You tell her tale marvelously, with great flow and characterization. You are also very good at telling this story from two perspectives. Excellent. Yes, the ending was a little rushed, but, had you dragged it on for longer, it just would have restated what had previously been said and become tedious. In saying that, it was the perfect length. There should definetely be more fics for this pairing like this. I congratulate you on a job well done.

When I first tried to read this, I found it hard to read seriously, because... I just have something against italics for some reason. So I scrolled down to the end and thought - wait, I like that ending. (the last part of the convo between Kyou and Kagura) So I went back up and read the whole thing. Fantastic.

A very abrupt ending, but I enjoyed it nonetheless. Shigure has a literary rival!! ^_^

o my freaking gosh! that story is beautiful! i just absolutely loved it! its in my favorites and everything. i hope u make more!

That was a sweet little story I have to admit. I loved the anime but I've grown to adore manga Akito. So I prefer Akito as what she really is a woman with many complicated layers that isn't necessarily dying but slowly being driven insane by the little voices in her ears.

I could see Kagura as a writer. And I certainly adore the Kyou and Kagura pairing. And the ending was very sweet. Nice job.

your story is so sweet and simple.. and it totally opens up a new point of view for me..

although the ending was a little fast-paced, and I'm a big KxT fan, I can understand how Kagura and Kyo really felt =)

great story~~

*SNIFFLES* KYO/KAGURA FOREVER!!

a very kickass story! very original!

I didn't think that was a stupid ending at all! The entire piece was beautifully written; sweet and moving without being sappy or overly emotional. I was certain it was going to end and a Tohru/Kyou and I still loved it! Having the Kyou and Kagura just made it all the better for me.

Kagura acting as sister to Akito in his time of pain is something I can very much imagine her doing. She's very empathetic, whatever else she is, and I'm glad you had that part of her personality show through. I also liked that she never spoke up when Akito's change was credited to Tohru.

I just loved this fic! This is one of the best ones to come out recently and I thoroughly enjoyed reading it. Would it be all right to host this on Neko Ino with your other works?