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| Dzzl 2008-05-18 ch 14, | abuseThis is a great story. A very interesting way of letting their love seep into the world.. The moment where dr. Wilson returns the book to Sara and strokes her hand for a second really reminded me of "The Silence of the Lambs". Very nice, thank you! |
| Kelly 2008-05-01 ch 14, anon. | abuseWow, that was fantastic! I could almost feel their fear, and my heart broke when they were avoiding each other, and again when they admitted how they felt. More, please!! Kelly xx |
| jenstog 2008-03-25 ch 14, | abuseawesome fic :) |
| xkiisstheraiin 2007-12-30 ch 14, | abusewoww. that was amazing! this is definitely one of my favorite stories.. like, ever.. haha i'm being reduced to inarticulateness.. great job !! :) |
| topoftheiceberg 2007-09-13 ch 14, | abuseBeautifully written! I loved the way you worked Dr. Wilson into this story, especially how everything tied together so neatly. I normally don't particularly like flashbacks within a story, but every one was placed perfectly in this one. Absolutely wonderful. :D |
| anneruhland 2007-04-24 ch 1, | abuseI ran across this story just the other day and I'm so glad that I found it when it was complete. I would have hated to wait for each chapter to publish. It was painful to read and yet compelling enough to keep me reading. I took about an hour break just to calm down. I'm glad that Gil and Sara won in the end. anne |
| Tina 2007-03-19 ch 14, anon. | abuseI'm speechless! And in a good way:) |
| Syvah 2006-10-06 ch 14, | abuseWow, wonderfully written! I felt that everyone was perfectly in character, and the casefile was simply riveting! I’m glad Wilson didn’t go for an insanity plea. I can’t help but think, though, that Sara would have endured that for any of her friends rather than be the cause of their deaths. Regardless, it’s an extremely powerful story and a testament of Griss and Sara’s love. Bravo! |
| topsy910 2006-01-06 ch 14, | abuseomg! incredible! u can sure make ur readers cry! |
| JesSickUh 2005-12-31 ch 14, | abuseI read this story in one sitting, and now I know why it's being recommended all over the place. I thought Dr. Lurie was a nut job, but Lee Wilson is a whole new level of crazy. The casefile was well thought out and I was at the edge of my seat at the end of each chapter...heck, the end of each paragraph. I really enjoyed the team effort it took in finding them. I am so glad that Gil and Sara have closure now. Thank you for writing this incredibly powerful fic. |
| Moo Chapman 2005-10-29 ch 14, | abuseA very interesting story, and I loved the way you told in flash backs. Pandora Moo |
| CSIslave 2005-10-29 ch 14, | abusesorry I didn't review for all the chapter in between... this is either the #1 or #2 fanfiction that I have ever read, and I have read a lot of them. You captured all the characters and emotions to the point of perfection. You came up with a great plot and kept it alive. You applied your knowledge of other things to make this a wonderful story. I'm glad, in a way, that it's over, because I know I would have gone crazy waiting for you to finish it. You did a beautiful job, and I hope you're very proud; you should be! |
| CSIslave 2005-10-28 ch 3, | abuseanother great chap... you are very smart! well, I wish Sara would face Grissom, cause I think I'm getting the general idea now... geez, I don't know how people waited for you to update when this story wasn't complete before! I hope it's complete now... augh! |
| CSIslave 2005-10-28 ch 2, | abusepoor Sara... and holy **, ow, my hand hurts just reading that... Sara really DOES love Grissom, but I'm still so confused... lol, I guess I'll have to keep reading! |
| CSIslave 2005-10-28 ch 1, | abuseoh, interesting... must read more! Good chap, loved the description, though I'm confused as all hell... but I suppose that's your point? |