I think you did nicely on this fic.^^

OMG, hehe! I loved that ending where everyone connected the dots to figure out that Natsuki had given Shizuru a kiss! ^o~ Pure genius.

Great story =) not much more to say

I absolutely enjoyed this story. It was my first Shizuru and Natsuki fanfic I've read. (I just never reviewed till now)

You portrayed the characters excellently, it is truly Natsuki and Shizuru. Beautiful.

aww that was sweet

i liked it

Of course it serves the fandom well. Very, very well. It had me at a cross between laughing and squealing the whole way through. Tell Kieli she's a good beta. I couldn't find any typos, which is all too rare these days.

Haha, I loved the part where you say "And Natsuki's stomach did not play nice." Ha, made my day.
Awesome, funny, sweet little onesie. I enjoyed the whole thing.

While reading this story, I had a cheesy smile plasterd on my face. And that's a good thing in a fluffy story like this.

I absolutely loved it. The editing was precise, the characters true to form... where do I even begin?

You really captured the feel of the characters in this -- just a great job all around. I look forward to reading more of your My/Mai-HiME fics.

A round of squeals and faintings occurred. -- I could almost imagine hundreds of fanboys and fangirls camping in front of Natsuki's door. LOL.

Anyway, nice fic! Thanks for the ShizNat fluff. XD

What?! I never reviewed?! What was I thinking? Dauthi knows I think she rocks. There isn't a story she's written that I haven't loved. Her concept for this story was genius on her part. I had nothing to do with it *G* I want more, too, so...there ya go. More My Hime!

...I love this fic...

You MUST write more. You have an incredible knack for spot-on Mai Hime fiction! An excellent fic.

...aw!! omg that was adorable! Really cute fic, wonderfully written. You kept them in character very well.

I suppose she would have fangirls wouldn't she? aw that peck on the cheek...so diapinting and yet so satisfying. Loved it. Great job! :)

Natsuki was portrayed perfectly, love!!
Like most people have mentioned, Shiruru didn't quite feel like the normal Shizuru pre-HiMElander, but then again, she shouldn't be considering the circumstances; I've always felt a certain degree of OOC is warranted and natural here, so no, I didn't think she wasn't too harsh on the fangirl who came between her heavenly date with Natsuki (whether on the phone or in the restaurant). Heh, I actually thought it was the fangirl who behaved a bit unnatural by calling out Kaichou-sama by her first name. xD

All of these SxN stories are massively OOC. It's wierd how people fall in love with certian characters and then go write fics in which they bear little resemblence to the canon version.

It looks like you got the 2 main girls personalities just right. Such SWEET moments between the two. But darn it, I wanted Natsuki to go for the lips! Perhaps a sequel can fix that...(hint hint)