eh. it was well-written, and who doesn't love a good RT? but i'd prefer a plot. especially one where neither of them die? (note my username) overall, i liked it. when you write another, make it longer and have a plot, mmkay? i'd really just call this freeform poetry because it lacks a plot.

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Quite lovely.

AHHHHH! i luv it! iluv it ! try a J/C one.. it would be awesome...

Grrrrwwww! Great descriptions. It's Supernarfic.

I LOVE IT

Ooooh, good.:)

Ugh. Can you NOT? I love R/T, but...

love it. it's great

i think it was beautiful. Everyone thinks nowadays only about cheap one-night stands, and this story showed some genuine love and compassion. Keep it up Ginny, you're a great writer!

O.O Oh my God...

Oh, my name's Ambrosius...at the moment is suddenly fascinated by *the teacup* but I just had 2 say sosweet! What jumped out of everyone's breakfasts this morning trying to eat their faces? I thought it was a sweet fic... but it was a tad documentaryish. I think it's great you're starting 2 describe their feelings, but try elaborating more on their thoughts, etc. I don't think it really needed a plot. If U wrote at the biginning, "This doesn't have a plot, but..." and everyone knew you they'd B all, "oh yay! Good one, but maybe..." Instead of "That was POINTLESS... blah, blah, blah..." And even though it seems C/J mush has dominating over the T/R mush ppl have a problem with it! I liked it. Try 2 work on your attn 2 detail first, and THEN give it a plot later. Quality over... Uh, facts & setting & stuff I guess. N-E-way, cadbury creme eggs & green mentos do horrible things to me in one day. Sumbody e-maim me! Even though I haven't replied 2 any1 yet... Selina sweety I hope you're feeling *better* now & I'm sorry 4 saying that stuff about Tears Of Pearls ppl. And I'm sorry 4 taking up so much space! I'll submit something I promise! I found a poem that my English teacher finally gave back... I just have 2 make it animorphs-y-ish. Or submit it somewhere else. But there's not a "Twelfth Day of July" series type thing either, is there? That was my favourite in 8th grade... Omigosh, sorry! Space... OMG I need sugar...

Oh my God!

::blinks:: Interesting... I'm not against detailed sex scenes, (just so you know, I write them myself) as long at they have a plot. That kind of smut I find stupid.

oh god not another one

I agree with Forlay. It's nice and all, really it is, but I also like plots there too. )