Wow. This is seriously disturbing. Really well-written, though - I could really sense the confusion and detachment and disorientation. Great stuff.

I love it. Quite poetic... The end bit caught me by surprise... but i loved it anyway (which is saying something because I don't normally go in for Harry/Draco stuff). Even if you end it there it would be an amazing one-shot... But if you decide to take it further i can't wait to see where you go with it. Great job!

dark, yes dark. But I loved it to much, altough I didn't understand a bit. I usually never read uncompleted fics, but I'll stick to yours if you update regulary. I really, really loved it! It's so, so, so... I don't know, brilliant

Very good... Wait he's in love with Harry. Nice, is he going to come out of his comma soon?

Lauren

Emptyhumanity@

hi. i liked this, it was very dark. very dark. the ending sort of got me cause it seemed more about his father. so sad. you're a very good writer. latter.