i know im really perverted, espacially in yaoi stuff and i have this really vivid picture in my head... ahem... nevermind...

oh yeah, about the picture? more like horny than vivid... okay, okay... ill shut up! _

incest aside very good descriptions and story

I LOVE IT! i was like ok... its yaoi and i love seifer and squall but the laguna thing.. i was a little put off but read it anyways.. and for once some how... you made it so i wasnt sicked by it like i normaly am.. (that and the whole harry blakc thing eww come on!) so i do hope you keep this story alive.. give squall and l;aguna pov.. and some more.. so we can truely know if the babbles for laguna are true..

Zoe

Assertive Laguna, the most wonderful kind of Laguna. (:

And Seifer is an asstastic idiot, silly boy needs a little more faith.

There's no saying how much I adore the strange relationships within this threesome, but I think you captured them pretty good. :3

*loved on you hard*