 5123 2009-12-19 . chapter 4more more more please! |
 AnzuxSeto 2006-08-14 . chapter 4 UPDTAE! its really good! i can't wait for more! |
 ILB 2006-08-07 . chapter 4Ooh!
This is definitely interesting! I like the descriptive language which, without going overboard or being TOO descriptive, adds just the right sort of "poetic" flavor to the story. It's early yet, but so far the characterization has been quite good as well. Not to mention the AWESOME plot-line. (I've always been interested in the whole Anzu/Yugi relationship, then Seto coming in to stir things up.)
Good chapter! Eh, good fic all around actually! You've caught me-- not just with the teaser, but with the first three chapters as well.
Can't wait to find out what happens next!
ILB |
 Azurite 2006-07-31 . chapter 3I found this through a C2 update. It's very cute! The first real chapter had my old Revolutionshipper squeeing in delight. And I have to thank you for not "conveniently" giving Yami a separate body, or killing him off altogether. This is a nice sort of alternate reality branching off from any given point in the series, and I like how it flows.
Two things though: why is it you could use the é in fiancé but not in Téa's name? They're the same symbol! Also, the meaning of flowers... I've never heard of a peony as a symbol of renewed life, but it does mean "happy marriage" and "prosperity;" orchid, likewise, isn't a symbol of fertility, but it is a symbole of love, beauty, refinement, and magnificence.
I half-expected Téa to admit to Mai that she'd had a fling or one-night stand with Kaiba. That would have given her a reason to feel obligated to invite him (closure; though I've seen fics where she's about to marry Yuugi and she intentionally DOESN'T invite Kaiba for that very same reason-- that's the fun thing about this scenario: it can be done well with so many twists!). But without that sort of thing tying her to him, I wonder-- how can you get a girl who's so deeply in love with Yuugi and Yami to fall in love with KAIBA? I look forward to reading the rest-- I just had to comment on what I'd read so far! :) |
 Heart's Door 2006-07-30 . chapter 4Oh no! >< Tea isn't going to end up accidentally leading Kaiba on is she? Or even worse, she isn't going to actually fall in love with him, is she?? She can't just forsake Yugi and Yami like that!! They're just too nice!! *cries*
Anyway... Your series is awesome! Not only is it well-written, but it's also really exciting and perfectly captures the characters' personalities!! Please write the nezt chapter soon! (Really, really, REALLY soon!) |
 Novalee Phoenix 2006-07-30 . chapter 4this was really good! please update soon! |
 Sanguine Dreams 2006-07-30 . chapter 4Hells no things aren't going to be easy. Yami/Yugi are engaged to Tea and they're about to get married! ACK! How will Seto-chan be with her? ;_;
Update soon!
~Sanguine Dreams |
 Lucida Lownes 2006-07-30 . chapter 4Write more! More more more! *breathes* I'm good. Great stuff. Keep on going! :) |
 animegirl 2006-07-30 . chapter 4 plzz update soon the story is getting really interesting i want to know what happens next
plz update ASAP |
 becky 2006-06-26 . chapter 3 very nice! please this story up. i love seto and tea stories! please have those get toghter but don't hurt yami(yugi)too bad! i love this story! |
 darkblinds 2006-06-05 . chapter 3More Please.
I love your title.
-db |
 PhantasyDreamer 2006-02-25 . chapter 3Nice story you got going here. It looks to me as if Tea and Yugi/Yami are really in love, despite the fact that this is a Seto/Tea fic. But it’s cool. I like it so far and I can’t wait till you update. This story is going good so far. Hope you update soon. |
 Heart's Door 2005-09-10 . chapter 3wow, that was awesome!
the story was well written, and you captured the personalities perfectly! ^_^
i really can't wait until you write the next chapter. i wonder who tea will marry in the end. lol.
by the way, who is going to be the best man and the bridesmaid? (and there has to be a flower girl and ring bearer) |
 Tefa 2005-09-09 . chapter 3 Can you please continue this story??it is really beautiful |
 Chained and Tortured 2005-09-06 . chapter 3^-^ UPDATE SOON! |