OMG please... You have to update this. It's a great story and I'm hooked onto it... So please update this

Liked it so far, are you still working on this fic?

HEY! why didn´t you continue? i loved this story... i´m very disapoint...

Very cool and very interesting.

I've enjoyed reading this, please do post more of it sometime...

Ack! I just ignored work for an hour to blow thru all 13 chapters of this story! How did I miss it before?! You've done a lovely job with putting out just the right amount of information to make the reader want to keep reading to find out what's going on! Anyhow, I'm thoroughly enjoying it, and looking forward to an update soon!

Aw. I'm loving Grissom so much right now. And I love the small steps. There's been so much between them, it wouldn't make sense for them to rush. I can't wait for the next chapter!

hahaha...fireants nice.
update really soon
-mystical panther

That's not fluff-it's pure, simple adult behavior by two idiots who finally are willing to let someone in!

Okay-one idiot and one overthinking easedropping Sara!

Good update-please no more one step forward two steps back-don't want to do that dance again!

Thanks-now what?:)

Perfect. This is exactly the way I would expect a situation and conversation like this to go between Grissom and Sara. I could see their expressions and hear their voices as clearly as if I were watching them on television - great characterization. Grissom with his double entendres and Sara pushing, yet accepting of Grissom's hesitancy - both with a little added emotion as they have revealed a bit more of themselves to each other and see their relationship slowly evolving. I loved your closing lines in this last chapter - a classic Grissom and Sara moment. Well done.

Another great chapter. Can't wait for part two of that talk. But its really in character for them not to talk out everything all at once. looking forward to more...

e i want to give you a real review and tell you how I love the moment when Sara tells him that he can leave and he says no, and everything, but all I can think is, I want more! Keep writing!

oh i want to know what his nightmare was! tell us!!
i loved this chapter it was really good!! you should make them longer!!
update real soon
-mystical panther

First of all, I'm sorry that I haven't reviewed this fic in such a long time. Real life was a bit mean those last weeks.

Now to the story; I'm still enjoying it big time and I love how you handle the tightrope walk between angst and blossoming romance. Of course your portrayal of the characters is still as excellent as it used to be.

By the way, that is a mean cliffhanger at the end of chapter 12. When did you say the next chapter will be posted ;-)

Sira

That is so good-I love Sara's looking after Gris
when he had his nightmare. And...Gris's wanting to
smell which shampoo Sara uses-very sweet!

Good update-I smell angst coming but please let it
be good result angst!LOL!

Thanks-now what?:)