E! Oh god, you cannot kill off Sam & Luka! Or Susan! I am looking forward to where this goes - update soon!

- Casey

Dude, I've been haunting this section of hoping that Dubenko might turn up in a story eventually, and by Jove, he has! I will be continuing to read your story due to that. :) I think your punctuation usage could be improved (commas where there should be periods in some places) but otherwise I think you're good to go. :)

Hi there Rosanna

This is a really good start. Can't wait for more.

Please don't tell me you killed Susan. I know she doesn't have all that many fans but come on she has a child and then there's Chuck to consider.

Btw what happened to Carter?

Luka's going to be okay though, right?

Okay, good start now all you have to do is update really, really soon okay?

Thanks, great first chapter you've got me intrigued.

Alta

Well i am so very hooked! Please update soon, it is VERY exciting, and VERY well written!

That was so totally awesome huni!

I was just like :o all the way through! I know you wouldnt kill them, but get Luka and Sam out! lol :p

Ch2 soon! Becs x

go rosannah! great start! keep it up! (im givin u a good review afta the 1 u gave me)