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| ale 2007-08-07 ch 1, anon. | abusea LITTLE 2 peotic dont u think? |
| kathy 2007-06-27 ch 1, anon. | abusei haven't even read the whole thing yet and i know it's good..hell i barly even read the begining and i knew it was good |
| SasukeBlade 2007-04-10 ch 1,  | abuseIronically enough, for a moment I think I forgot to breathe. No dialogue, no action, no thoughts, no movement, nothing but a description of a scene, but it was carried out so beautifully. I've read stories that have lasted for hundreds of thousands of words and failed to say even half of what this little moment said. Thank you. |
| painted ambiguity 2007-04-04 ch 1, | abuseW-wow. That's...one of the most beautiful things I've ever read-And yet, it wasn't exactly /beautiful/. It was perfect, it was modest, it was honest, it was everything in between, because that's the way it was intended. The affect you got of me was a rare one, and it was pleasant. Nothing was out of place, and nothing too shocking. I felt an equal amount of all emotion put into one bowl, and not one ever superseding the others. You truly are an amazing writer. Second person was the only way you could write this, and it worked out just the way it was supposed to. |
| echolock 2007-03-04 ch 1, | abuse*breathes deeply and sighs* It was beautiful. I have no idea if it was from the descriptions or my over active imagination (probably both) but I could smell it, I could see it, I was there. It was one of the most beautiful things I've ever read, and I read a lot. Congratultions, you put the words I scrawl on paper to shame. I am humbled. -Peace (and not much else) -Alex, the strange |
| vikingpirate 2007-02-25 ch 1, anon. | abusebeautiful. |
| rexroy 2006-12-29 ch 1, anon. | abuse(Screaming)...(A breath)... (More screaming)... Oh my gosh. Are you a professional writer? You have an amazing form and the feelings are perfect! How on earth did you write this? You are amazing! ! |
| KannaKyomu 2006-01-24 ch 1, | abusewow. that was.. really good. Your a very talented author. I envy you. Keep writing. |
| TrueLoveHurts 2006-01-14 ch 1, | abuseduh . . duh (sputters somewhat before blinking in total speechlessness) omg. . . that is a beautiful picture. i'd like to try to draw it but i know i could never do it justice. (sighs) so beautiful, are you going to write more? if so, update soon, kk? much love to your genius!! |
| wellduh... 2005-12-27 ch 1, anon. | abuseSecond-person perspective works surprisingly well. Nice. |
| Mizuki-teh-Crazian 2005-11-05 ch 1, | abuseaboslutely magnificent! |
| Hakusho009 2005-09-18 ch 1, | abuseThat...was the coolest thing I've ever read and, believe me, I've read a lot. You are a master. |
| sasukeandrockleelvr 2005-08-23 ch 1, | abuseThat was Deep...your really good at writing...I mean seriously woah, I like could see the stuff happening! |
| minoko-chan 2005-08-19 ch 1, | abusethat was really deep...but I enjoyed it none the less. It, was like a picture, in my head, and I saw it perfectly. you are a talented author and an artist with words ^-^ |
| aisarikka 2005-08-18 ch 1, | abusedamn... just, damn... *gets on her knees and starts worshiping* i wasn't able to read your original... or maybe i've forgoten... but... its just... damn... |