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| tiana3826 2008-02-27 ch 1,  | abuseI just found all your stories and love this one! It is adorable! |
| Wander52 2007-10-23 ch 1, | abuseOh man, what a story...this has to be one of the most heartwrenching stories I've ever read...more, more. |
| Kristafied 2007-02-16 ch 1, | abuseOh, this set of stories is just wonderful. I love the characters of the kids, and the GSR is fabulous. Thanks so much for posting this. |
| Casandra 2005-08-05 ch 1, anon. | abusee. That was so sweet. I almost cried when April said "So wake up already Daddy, cause your little girl found her knight in shining armor and she wants him to meet the first man she ever loved." Awesome story. Cas |
| spongbob 2005-06-23 ch 1, anon. | abusehello, i ws just wondering if you were planning to update or write another chapter cause this is a great story, i read "Gily" and was very excited when i saw that this was the sequel. anyway keep up the good work, please write another chapter! |
| hazelmom 2005-04-10 ch 1, | abuseBrilliant, Ms. Grits. I was captivated. Loved it. Do another chapter. Have Gris meet Vincent. This is such a great story. sheila |
| 4NZic 2005-04-09 ch 1, | abuseI almost wasn't going to read this because it looked like it was going to be a character death -worse - possibly a Grissom death - which is unthinkable. I'm glad I continued reading because it was lovely, just as touching as "Gily". It stayed in my head for a long time, which is always a good sign of a great story in my book. It was a nice angle to take - the grown up Grissom children. The love for their wonderful, loving father - how could it be any different? I liked how Clay was a copy of Sara, to match Gil's Gily, and April was a "happy surprise". And there was the happy surprise of a happy ending. Thanks, great job. |
| StarMajesty 2005-04-08 ch 1, | abuseAw. |
| jtbwriter 2005-04-08 ch 1, | abuseThat's good-very good! The children and their POV's-Sara's desperation-and Gris wakes up-just so sweet and honest! Thanks for a beautiful "what if?"! |
| Juwist 2005-04-08 ch 1, | abuseI loved this chapter... you are a great writer, and I was missing your stories! |
| Meganp 2005-04-08 ch 1, | abuseI read Gily before reading this one and my god, both stories are breathtaking! You did a hell of a job. Again! Hugs. Meg. |
| KleeNut214 2005-04-08 ch 1, | abuseOh, wow. This is just lovely. It's got all the charm of your original Gily story (quite a feat), and made me love the two new kids right off the bat. Wish I could think of more to say, but "wow" pretty much covers it. Beautifully done. |
| eac-dudette 2005-04-07 ch 1, | abuseo wow omg omg that was just awsome! wow! |
| AngelApple70x7 2005-04-07 ch 1, | abuseThat was pretty awesome, some errors made it a little confusing at times but did not detract from the storyline. |