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halyna 2009-01-07 . chapter 4
*JUMPS UP ANS DOWN IN EXCITEMENT*
REMUS! "WEARING THE TROUSERS"
PERFECT PERFECT PERFECT
BLOODY BRILLIANT!
^_^
FlameintheFlood 2008-11-23 . chapter 7
I'm so joining you wit the popcorn! Good job!
I love your story!
Thanks for being awesome.
FlameintheFlood 2008-11-23 . chapter 6
Aw, flamers should go get lives. Cute ending. But to be honest, I'm much more excited for the epilogue.
FlameintheFlood 2008-11-23 . chapter 5
that was a cruel place to leave off! Loving the convo at the end. I totally think that Remus would be the dominating type. all those pent up, repressed, hormones. They gotta go somewhere. I kind of agree that Sirius is a little OOC, but I don't think it's too bad. Great job!
FlameintheFlood 2008-11-23 . chapter 4
citrus! yay! btw, do you know where that phrase comes from? lemon... I don't get it.
FlameintheFlood 2008-11-23 . chapter 3
I love your writing style! (duh as this is the third story of yours I've read tonight)
I LOVE LOVE LOVE the conversation things at the ends of the chapters. I feel like I talk to my charectors alot when I'm writing too!
Thanks for being awesome!
-FitF-
-Margaret-
xrosiex 2008-09-01 . chapter 7
OMG I have like so much love for this story! It's awesome, and 'The Smutty Epilogue' literally made my day XD
moonfoot13 2008-08-05 . chapter 7
realy love your work its funny and intresting
Kati Kate Monster 2008-07-26 . chapter 7
you're a/n's were almost better than the fic itself! haha, I love this fic, I had to reread it to get all of the awesomeness in! great job!
Bee's Girl 2008-07-17 . chapter 7
So cute!! (how many times can I say that in one day?)
I like your little end of the chapter thingers..funny.
Good ol' Jamie was satisfied with just a peck! You know your madly in love when.

I was a little disappointed that there was no Lily kissing another bloke. I could see James exploding about that. Especially if it happened AFTER there little tender moment. But, it was good either way.

but who had James? Lily? and she was lieing? or did I miss that part...o.O

Either way good job!
fuzzyalligator 2008-06-23 . chapter 7
Ok, I finished the story and I can only say one thing: LOVED IT! It was so sweet. I agree with you about the flamers who keep coming back. Stupid heads, lol. I like how you ended the chapters, it was funny.

~Fuzzy~ :3
fuzzyalligator 2008-06-23 . chapter 5
Before I continue the story I must ask: where in Gravi do they say "I hope your dick shrivels up and falls off"? I can only imagine Shuichi saying that to Hiro. Or maybe to Yuki. Or maybe Yuki saying to someone. So I'm gonna go and finish the story now, bye.

~Fuzzy~ :3
Twinkie 2008-03-16 . chapter 6
I read the froggy review and I laughed. They explained themselves perfectly. "You are unreservedly pathetic, starved for attention, and lost in a land that reality forgot." Yo Froggy! Demonsblade ISN'T the one who wrote a 1036 words and 6358 characters long flame instead of doing something useful in your life. Seriously, if you don't like it NO ONE is forcing you to read it. So if you don't f*ckin' like it don't f*ckin' read it! Sry Demonsblade, you know for ranting, but Froggy just mad me so mad!
Twinkie 2008-03-16 . chapter 7
YEAH! The Smut.:) Oh, and I have a question. If a person doesn't like a certain couple, why would they read about it ? Just seems stupid to me. Oh and I like Dominate Remus 'cause Sirius just seems so much like a love-sick puppy. Keep Writing.
Charity Angel 2008-03-04 . chapter 7
Tee hee, this was great! Love the idea of Secret Snog - may have to play that at some point.
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