awe! he loves her!

lol! wait till kouga see's kagome!

oh-ho! the nerve of that man...he is so stubborn! You really are a terrific writer...hope you update fast.

i want more please please

OK, to me, it made sense to review all five chapters at once. Sadly, I've forgotten the details of each individual chapter, so I'll just review the story as a whole.

This is a very good story so far. At times, it felt like I was reading a script from Rumiko Takahashi for a new movie or something. Then I had to remind myself that this is .

This story isn't without flaw, but it's still good. I'm noticing that Sesshomaru refers to himself as 'this Sesshomaru'. Same with Jaken. I'm wondering if that's something you alone do, or if I'm missing out on something. Either way, it reminds me of Rurouni Kenshin, when Kenshin calls himself 'this one'. Normally I'd have no issue with it, but it gets tiring after a little while to read it like that as opposed to 'I' or 'me'.

I'll leave this off at that, and await the next chapter. Keep up the good writing.

the beginning of your story did not suck i thought it was very good compared to others whom i have read though i am someone you do not know about i love reading fics like this and yours is good and i am only on the first chapter and you are very good for your first fannfic keep up the good work and if you havent written any other fanfics you should write another one

please update vey soon ^^

you did a great job, I truly think it's very interesting

so...i am absolutely HOOKED to this story. Seriously, i'm putting off working on my essay due after tomorrow to read it.its flipping great. I really love how you've managed to keep to Sessh's character and STILL show a little bit of...shall we say amiable feelings towards her without making it OCC. J'adore! And I LOVE LOVE LOVE that you're bringing up more of the demon world into the story. Almost no sesskag writers really go into it passed Naraku and his minions. And even fewer writers actually think of exploring the aspect of Sesshoumaru's status as a Demon Lord and the world which he's a part of seperate from InuYasha's. I LOVE IT! lol This is an interesting fic, too, because you've managed to make me sympathize with InuYasha and even love him for how caring he is of Kagome. Its not about controlling her or winning against his brother, but is of genuine concern for her against a known enemy. It was so sad when Sesshou took her away. =( But of course, for my sesskag loving heart, exciting. teehee. Oh, and did Sesshoumaru abruptly take Kago away from dinner because he felt Kouga approaching?

great storyy! keep it up.please do update sooner.l0l
until nextime
-shy.l0

I'm very impressed with your writing skills its very detailed and a little humorous.In other words I LOVE IT!
I can't wait to read what happens next.Please Hurry with the upcoming chapters.THANK YOU!

i thought it was great. you captured sessy's personality great. most people make a mushy romantic. ugh. i've had this in my favorite forever and i thought i'd read it. i think it's a great story. keep up the awesomeness.

hope you update soon!

kagome should go through some special training or something i just cant stand the weak kagome shes kinda annoying in this fic.. but nontheless its a great fic! just a suggestion tho.. cant wait till next chapter update soon!

that so did not suck! very nice start!