WOW! I'm REALLY looking forward to the next chapter! I'm waiting for the meeting between the wizards and the Fellowship. Will the Wizards join the fellowship or do you have something else planned?

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Please update soon, this is really good! :D

YES I AM ONE OF THEM, plz pick it back up again plz

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I actually have to say that this chapter had much less grammer mistakes than the ones before it. Good work on this chapter and I'm glad that you found a way around my conccern in the last review. Now on to my question. Can you plz write more chapters for this story? It's actually rather good and I'd like to finish reading it if possible. I of course understand if you are to busy or some thing of the sort, but if possible I would love to read more of this story. You have some really good ideas even if your grammer isn't always the greatest.

I say that the original one is better for this story. Later if you plan on having Harry, Moony, and Padfoot fight against the dark army that is in Middle Earth then the werewolf form would help a hell of a lot against the worgs. I'm not sure if I spelt that right, but the point is that they are wolves that are specifically breed to fight for the dark side of the war. If you remember anything about book one, they attack the fellowship on the top of the hill where they are sleeping for the night. This happens right before the fellowship goes in to Moria.

The fight was fine. I don't get to read many good combat scenes so this is actually one of the better ones. Although I would like to suggest you give some examples of what kind of spells padfoot is using when you said that he used dark arts that his family forced him to learn.

I personally am not 100% sure about this, but I believe that the elven language is actually latin. When I read Lord of the Rings I recognized some of the words that were in the songs. Although I can't say for sure one way or the other my latin teacher said that it is quite possible.

huh. I really liked this! even though there were a bunch of grammar mistakes and stuff...but it was still an interesting story, but it hadn't even gotten to the good part!! i wish you hadn't stopped writing it. :| oh well. :D

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good story but hurry up and update 'kay? ;]

I love the story and plot. Its sads me that this story is in hiatus; but don't worry I understand about hiatus. Few of my own stories are too as well.

Just remember, don't make Potter, Black and Remus very powerful, they are still as what they are. They have limits.

Good luck on the Writer's Block or whatever made this story in hiatus.

Poor Remus and Sirius! LOL ^^ PLEASE update!

i just finishing reading the whole story. Its really captivating. I hope it's not abandoned because i can't wait for the next chapter

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