I like the way this ended. Just enough resolution but not definitive so it is up to the reader to pick the ultimite outcome. Sorry it took so long for me to get around to commenting on it.

Can you send me a link to the other version? Thanks.

LoP: by god, i love the lemon!1
YN: very maturely put lemon, me likey. not those sloppy, all over the place types, but something worth reading. very, very nice.
LoP: me lovey! we love lemon even if we are only, you know the number, years old!
Both: see ya in Eternal Love 2, and love this story!

So far, so good! Ok, I'll forgive the cliff-hanger as long as it doesn't take too long for the next part. Xp

...you skipped the best part!

Wow. This is AU I take it? How come Yami no Bakura has Touzoku-ou Bakura's scar but not his coloring?

Heh, I can't see the name Anya and not think of Buffy the Vampire Slayer. I love how you described what she was wearing without falling into Mary Sue land with the descriptions, giving just enough to lend a vague picture to the readers' minds. It's always tricky, writing fanfiction with an OFC. There is OOCness, but in this environment, it fits. I'm sure any one of us would kill to be in Anya's place.

*sighs* Ah! So sweet! Ok, I'm happy now *goes into dream state*

YES!

HOT!

Is it finished yet?

Is it finished yet?

*begging* Plez hurry up and finish.

Ok, you know I am just giving you a hard time, but I do really want to see how this ends. ^_^

hehe, Cool! Egyptian musk? exotic! Never smelt it though. Bakura and Atem friends? o, I sense a fight coming up over Anya!

Wow! I can picture this, Atem and Bakura dancing in a nightclub...^_^
I'll take Bakura is Anya will go with Atem...lol.
Awesome!!