Another great story!

A great fic! I loved the love between Harry and Draco. It was great that they got Sirius form beyond the veil! Loved it! ~ZLB

I liked it... Well done.. :)

your story line is interesting, i like elf stories, but your writing is pretty awful. every once in a while i stumble upon a ff net story with a fairly decent number of reviews that just slams home to me the low age level, and low education level, of the average ff net reader. i'm sure you enjoyed writing this story, but you need a couple higher ed classes in basic english. and you need a proof-reader. you have promise, but it is going to take work on your part--and listening to your critical reviews.

you are not a natural writer, there is a lot of awkwardness in your dialogue, and you continually use thought instead of taught (the past and past participle of the word "teach"). but i like your story line and it is readable, and i keep turning the page. so thank you very much for sharing! i'm still reading.

I like the spin on the Creature blood. Very nice.

awesome

omg ! It's a very amazing fanfic ! I love it so much ! Well Done !

very good. I really enjoyed it.

I loved this story. No other way to put it. It was simply amazing. I was awed by the dynamics of every character. Amazing job. I look forward to more stories by you.

love it

I am proud of you. You did it. A great great Story well written I enjoyed this story I am looking forward to your next Harry potter Fic.

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This was realy good, I enjoyed it very much.
Loved the way you played there growing into being who they are.

DragZ

Aww, I love the story! Totally awesome!

Argh more cliff hangers, I think they are going to have a kid. >.>