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| sparklyshimmer2010 2007-10-26 ch 8,  | abuseno! thats evil. i dont know whn you last updated, but i would appreciate one soon! this is really good |
| Sheppardster 2005-08-18 ch 8, | abuseArgh *bites fingernails down to the wick*... |
| phoenixfeather6988 2005-08-18 ch 8, | abuseomg, you can't kill him. you better update soon, other wise i might have to read the rest of this from my padded cell, becuase it will have driven me crazy! |
| Estellio 2005-08-14 ch 7, | abuse'If only I'd been stronger,' She thought. 'Daddy wouldn't have had to protect me and now he wouldn't be sick.' She wasn't strong like her Daddy, or brave like her Mommy. She was weak. Her mother would probably send her to the wraith to be eaten, or back to Earth to live in an orphanage. 'Mommy will stop loving me because I took Daddy away.' Throughout the whole fic tears threatened but when i read that a balled like a child. You horrible person,you made me cry *sniff sniff* although I was iffy about reading one of your Shweir fics I persivered and I have to say...wow. I'm taking off my critics hat for once and bowing. This is a fantastic fic. now if only you applied your unique and beautiful writing style to humour... |
| Megahope 2005-07-31 ch 7, | abuseIm kinda stupid i didn't realize there were more chapters ionly read the one at first and tought that was it, but now that ive read the lot I love it udate soon!! |
| Megahope 2005-07-31 ch 1, | abuseSo powerful! i loved it! |
| cbprice25 2005-07-28 ch 1, | abuseAw. |
| screaminglife 2005-07-28 ch 7, | abusei can kind of imagine the feeling a writer gets if they leave a cliffie so i wont be harsh. interesting looking fwd to next chapter. and very quick update btw.good on u! |
| puddles1311 2005-07-27 ch 7, | abuseARG! EVilly cruel cliffy! great chapter tho! |
| xkawaiix 2005-07-27 ch 7, | abuseYes indeed, evil evil, cliffy :p |
| Knocknashee 2005-07-27 ch 7, | abuseTsk tsk...evil cliffhanger! Can't wait to read more...loving the characterisations here... :o) |
| screaminglife 2005-07-26 ch 6, | abuseditto wht the xsomething something said. sorry in a hurry. |
| xkawaiix 2005-07-25 ch 6, | abuseWah! OMG, that was so emotional, it's breaking my heart! You can't let him die please! *sob* |
| screaminglife 2005-07-20 ch 5, | abuseanother good chapter but make them longer. either tht or update oftener(is tht a word) u cant just leave us wondering ! |
| xkawaiix 2005-07-19 ch 5, | abuseOMG OMG OMG, this is so sad, OMG, don't let John die please! |