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| Zen-Chan 2006-09-30 ch 1,  | abuseWow I think that is just what was going through Ed's head at the time. Poor guy. caya |
| Kaori-chan92 2006-03-01 ch 1, | abuse@#$%! I NEED MORE TISSUES! TISSUES! |
| Dusha 2005-04-23 ch 1, | abuseWow, how beautifully powerful. I could vividly see in my mind Ed clapping his hands together over and over in vain with tears streaming down his face still visible despite the rain. You have artistically captured one of the most dramatic and heart-wrenching moments in the entire series, so kudos to you. Thank you for the simple but moving piece. |
| midge lupin 2005-04-21 ch 1, | abuseaww that was so sad...the whole thing with nina made me cry *sniff* good job you capture ed's emotions perfectly! |
| Lucrecia LeVrai 2005-04-10 ch 1, | abuseThat was good; short, yet at the same time sort of tragic and definitely true to Ed's character. |
| KJ Mustang 2005-04-09 ch 1, | abuseI love this story. It's sad, but those were probably the thoughts going through Ed's head at that time. Are there going to be future chapters? If so, I would like to know. |
| Henrika 2005-04-08 ch 1, | abuseWow, very insightful. Good portrayal of Ed's thoughts during that scene. Keep writing! |
| ShardyPsykoElf 2005-04-08 ch 1, | abuseAfter swimming in a sea of OOCness and Mary-Sues... ...I finally find a fic that makes the entire trip to this site worth it. I applaud the beauty of this work. Short, but to the point. You've captured the inner turmoils within Ed beautifully. In fact, I shall glomp you now! Thank you for trying to keep this fandom up to par as possible. |
| AngelSachiya 2005-04-08 ch 1, | abuseAW Poor Ed! Great Fic! |