Reviews for The Girl From Not Around Here

ZenPotter 2007-07-29 ch 1,	abuseyou are very good they are both A.I aren't they? I kept wondering how her skin kept changing like that, first she was black and then mixed and then white, even her hair changed and that kinda made it clear that she was a robot. Its sad, though...this story makes you think
Senriou of Veiron 2005-07-19 ch 1,	abuseOi! Konnichiwa Bryan. You wright so well. At first I thought, 'Maybe the person she is waiting for is, Sean. And that he'd, at their last meeting, sit by her. That He'd be who she was waiting for.' But I was wrong..Am I correct, though, in saying that Sean is an A.I.? I am off to read all your other peices. Seeya soon U. Bryan. =)
ethereal 2005-07-01 ch 1, anon.	abuseDo not be disheartened from the amount of reviews you have received. I think your story shows the sadness of emotions and for those that do not have them, that the girl in your wonderful story is unfortunate to forever wait for a person that will never come back for her. For as she waits she succumbs to the fate of having to live for an eternity without meaning. Do not give up hope, for I believe that those that do not read are missing out on a precious gift that everyone can share and contribute to.
Jade R. Raven 2005-06-08 ch 1,	abuseThis is truly moving, very beautiful, and sad. I like how you slowly reveal that the two are both robots, and its just so...well, i can't really describe it, but moving comes close. You should be really proud of this, its going on my favorites.