Nicely written piece of work. It was very sweet and sad.

Wow, that was really good, very deep and emotional and nicely written. I particularly like the 2nd person thing- I've been dabbling in that a bit too, and I've come to really enjoy and admire it. Nice job!
~*~Emili~*~

wow. that was written beautifully. i really liked it. it showed parts of how much someone could have an infatuation with someone. i dont know. it was just so good. *sighs* i just really liked it.

Just... Wow. I love it.

I really felt that.
I dunno.

I like this, very describing of her, of which we don't really know or understand.

Wow, well written, as usual. I really do admire your works and I hope you keep writing. Damn, you really should be writing for real money. YOU ROCK!