If you have any sense in humanity you will send the rest of this to me. You said you had up to chapter fourteen done but nothing/: please would you send it to me or something.

Is there going to be more? Please tell me there is because I feel soooo bad for Ed I mean seriously! He loves her do much and do her to do that to him. I need to know what happens lol.

you must continue! :D

Please read more because i like the story andi need to know what happened to the baby and who is it Ed or Felix loove the story and write more

No offense, but that sucked. I mean, obviously you have talent, but I liked EdxWinry... And, shit, Winry wouldn't screw with his mind like that...

I love it, but I hate it. Why? Because this was last updated FOUR years ago, which translates to never being updated again. You evil person!

Anyway, great story!

QueenTiria

I managed to find the entire story at fullmetal-alchemist dot com and enjoyed myself reading it. There were a few "suspensions of disbelief" I had to conquer but, overall, I enjoyed the story. I was saddened by the ending - I thought Ed and Winry deserved some happiness for a change but it fit in very well with your tale.

Thanks for sharing it and it'd be great if you'd post the rest up here at ffn, so everyone else can read it, too.

-SJS

Not an EdxWinry fan.

A 'TALL...

But you did good...

Expecially with the little tid bit at the end...

Why couldn't Ed and ROY Wrestle?...

"WRESTLE"?

OMFG this fanfic is amazing and im dying to know what happens...u need to update seriously, or like send me the story to read it! i love this fic...its really really good, i even scowerd(sp?) ur homepage hingy u have until 1 in the morning seeing if u maybe posted it there...its a really good story and u rly shud consider writing more...it is rly good and i wnt to find ou what happens next...good luck in the air force! (read that on ur thingy :) ) u rly have a gift for writing fanfiction.. keep writin! :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D

I am on my knees, (I swear, I really am!) begging you to continue this. I have read a lot of EdWin fan-fictions, but this one's the best. You have to continue! *shakes fist* ...pweese? *puppy eyes of DOOM*

Wow! OMG great story! I hope Ed wins!

This is a awesome story! I love how you made Ed on here (lol). Keep up the super good work!:)

Poor Ed Winry doesn't love him Die felixs Die

Great stroy by the way

Update

mm.

So this fic really needs to be updated. It has been forever and I've become very sad ;.;

UPDATE SOON!

It's driving me crazy!

O_O why hasn't this story been updated? this has to be...one of the greatest EdxWinry stories i have EVER read! It's just amazing (too tired to explain, as it's almost 2 am).

You said you had the other chapters, so why didn't you post them? I ned them! I don't wanna sound crazy, but you're a brilliant writer, and I have to see how this whole thing turns out!

who's baby is it? I know Winry really loves Ed and she won't admit it! when is Ed gonna kick Felix's ass? I've gotta find out!

Please, please, PLEASE continue this! I'm begging you (i never beg!).

Colie-chan

EdxWinry forever!