That was hilarious! I couldnt stop smiling! It was so cute! absoloutly adore it! It is sincerly amazing! I hav to put this on my favorites!

OMG your story was hilarious! I was cracking up the whole time I was reading it!!

very funny.

it rocked! feel sorry for takato cause hes related to rumi,jin,chyako,and youji.
-lol-

tehe nice, this was cute and funny I liked it a lot. The language was not as good as others of yours I've read but it's still pretty good. I guess it matches the age that the main kids are so thats fine

that was so good and funny

"When your dad's mom was married to your mom's mom and your dad's mother was married to your dad's father things were more then a little screwy."
More then a little screwy? Well, in that sentence certainly ;-)
Apart from that great story, any chance that your going to write about Mai´s report?

haha I love it! GREAT story!

hehe this is cute. a whole ripple affect, and boy was the teacher and kids shocked. i liked! i don't read marmalade boy fanfics offen but i like the seres. great job!

that was a confusing story but it was good if you ask me!so are you going to add a chapter 2 chapter to it??

Out of the mouths of babes...

LOL! Poor Miss Honda is going to have words with her therapist over this...

I love your story but write more.

Wow, that was fantastic! Confusing, but fun! it's a bit of a shame that not a lot of people are aware of the anime/manga-Marmalade Boy. Anyway, I like your idea since it sets your fic apart from the usual fanfictions (y'know, the whole kids-in-the-future kind of idea). Keep it up and do some more and I'll read 'em!

Your story is utterly hilarious and unique; I love it.