It's really awesome, I like your characterization of characters. And Cedric is on good side now XD

Wonderful. Love It. Can't Wait For Next Chapter. UPDATE SOON! GAMBATTE NE:)

How do you write this stuff?? It's so damn good!

YAY FINALLY THE NEXT CHATER! I was beginning 2 think u'd given up on this story :) & that wouldve been extremely disappointing :( great job!

WOW! I can sum up this chapter in one word "AWESOME"!. I loved the part Elyon reveled to Phobos that she was the one who poisened the potion. At first I thought it was Voldeomort poisened the potion but I wouldn't be that surprised taking in account that he's evil and all. And btw, I totally agree with you, the not having enough time thing I'm having the same problem since I got into this new school which is a bummer 'cause I've got a bunch of stories in mind and no time to write them but hey, life's a b* and there's nothing you can do about it. So, anyway hope you new strategy works and update soon.

--xCornelia93x--

FINALLY! I can't wait to read more, so don't tale so long for the next chapter. Do u think you could add some more CxC in there? not big things or anything, just a sentace here and there. Anyway love the story.

-Fae

YAY! Update! So happy! Andd good chapter to though it was kinde hard to read with soo much going on in few words. Can't wait for the next chapter!
Destroying The World One Piece At A Time,
Cynder

thank you for updating! I look forward to the next chapter!

lq

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omg!! omgomgomgomg! i love love love it!! so glad to see you still writing this awesome story!! i totally know how you feel about college. EATS UP YOUR TIME!! same here. D:

but i hope you get the time to finish this story. ^_^ it's really awesome!!

best regards,
ava-chan

Excellent chapter! But are WIll and the others alright? Can't wait for the next chapter!

Please finish your story already. Please.

hey um when are u gunna write the next chapter i have read this story 3 times already and i would like to know if u are still writing this book.

i hope u get this message aky j xoxo

Write more pls!! this is a excellent story!~

Wonderful. Love It. Can't Wait For Next Chapter. UPDATE SOON! GAMBATTE NE!:)

PLEASE UPDATE THIS!