Please move this to the Wicked category. We're trying to get more fics in there. And that's where this belongs anyway. :-)

Nice. Very nice, indeed. A story with no paticular plot, yet is just as quenching as any other one-shot with a plot. Good job.

Very, very interesting. I loved the flow of it; it went well from each thought to the next. Very true to character without being exaggerating, or rewriting the book. I enjoy a bit of character insight and you did a nice job!

I absoultly love the last sentance!the whole thing is awsome too...but yeah so please keep going

That was very good. It is the first Wicked fiction that I have seen that I have been able to read all through. It is very well written and characterized. I applaud you and would love to read more.

I really enjoyed this story. Of course at this point, I'm overjoyed to merely find a story with correct spelling and grammar. I like the way you've captured Elphaba's circumstances, the way that she is continually an outsider, yet finally allowed a way of looking in. I also love the fact that this story is neither trite nor overly sentimental. I'll be grateful for any more fiction you choose to toss our way. Thanks for sharing your talents!

Wow...great characterization! You have truly captured Elphaba in all her observant glory. Please continue!

very very goot! eet mahks me whant to ruhn for Gohvahnahtoah! (governator)

It's late. I think someone spiked my frosted flakes...

It's very well writteb.

wow!! it's so good it's creepy. i hope you continue it, even though i've never read Wicked. The main character...i feel so bad for her and i don't even know her! very good tone. i love it

Oh my GOD! i didnt think there would be anyone writing about Wicked! Elphaba's feelings are expressed so beatifully and emotionally through your words. how she melts into everything around her. how she remembers her past. amazing. please write more!

That was excellent. Very well written, and I honsestly you can write that well near sleep (running very little sleep myself, and all the stuff I've tried to write has been crud). I love the insight. Perfect Elphaba, so sensitive. As Fiyero and Glinda say...
Fiyero: She doesn't give a twig about what other people think, does she?
G(a)linda: She does, she just won't show it.
I think you nailed that right on the head. Very nice. Like the style, the content, the insight... I just love it. I encourage you to put up more, we need more book fics!

-sighs- Lovely. Utterly lovely.

Nice insights to Elphaba, showing her more sensitive side we rarely see, but in a believable way; how she's tormented, how she fights it... You have such a way with words!

*Now, as she paces through the darkened alleyways, she fears only the shadows that take on the forms of familiar faces, beckoning to her with imagined pleas.*

Gorgeous. :) And haunting - it sent a shiver down my spine.

Well done! More from you, please?

I'm really into Wicked, and this is the first fic I've read about it. I love your story! Even though I haven't really seen the play, I listen to the soundtrack constantly, and we studied it in chorus. (There's a girl in chorus who's seen it, and she explained it.) The way Elphaba feels is brilliantly described. You're awesome! Keep it up!

o that was good. please don't stop it there!

This is good! keep it up i'd like to read more.