ehh just a tad better, but barely a notice

LOL first time i read this kind of fic pretty funny especially Will's character:D And how come James ignored Will? LOL:D nice one

OMG! That was so funny! I was seriously laughing. You should make a sequel! Onto Favs.

It's sad. Jack Sparrow is the only one who knows what to do because he is, in fact, a giant chicken. He's a chicken I tell ya! Pull off his bleedin hat! See? What did I tell you? A Chicken!

::humming:: you're not a man, you're a chicken, Boo...

Sorry, I'm really tired, and this is all that was going through my head as I read the story. Cute and funny, btw. Makes me miss Animaniacs.

I love Will being frightened. He's so cute.

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Very nice word-play there. The substiution for the lines from the movie was quite inspired. Nice going there...

LMAO!

My friends and I read this at the school library, and we were trying our best not to loud out loud!

HILARIOUS! Ah...

My friend randomly typed in chickens but we never expected to find anything! LOL!

soo funny! I actually laughed out loud!

Brilliant! Absolutely brilliant! Hilarious really,very original,I love originality. I bet the chickens had stowed away on Elizabeth's ship eight years ago after their unsuccessful attempt at getting Will...

Cooliness. Chickens are cool! I like how you did the thingy with the same lines as in the movie, only with chicken lines!

AH!NOT THE CHICKENS!

(hehehehehehehehehe!Funy story!)

Oh...my...Tolkien...that was hillarious!

Lol. I like it a lot. I love your stories, keep writing. Although it of course would have been better if Jack had a bigger role, and preferably had time to get drunk lol. But I LOVE CHICKENS EDDY! uh...sorry lol. Good story :D

Okay honestly now, are you some sort of comedic genius? That was the funniest fic EVER i was laughing the whole way through, and i'm not just saying that because i don't want the chickens to launch an attack upon me (heh) it was so funny i was giggling like a school girl (as if i'm not) the whole way through. Will's a punk. You're way too cool my friend.

It was well written. I thought it amusing.